Jade Exit Poet Couplet

My Dream Car

A beautiful mustang drove past me
The sound of its engine was gasping

It's my dream car
Me and that mustang can go so far

That car is soon to be mine
I can't wait for my speeding fine

In my dreams this car can fly
Me and my mustang in love in the sky

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Frank F. Atanacio March 31, 2009 at 12:04 PM i liked this one-- well done Exit

Leon Wilson March 30, 2009 at 1:50 PM Jade sometimes dreams do come true but don't get that speeding fine. If I'm hitching a lift please pick me up in your mustang. Leon

Raul Moreno March 30, 2009 at 12:28 PM Nice dream, it's good to dream. I am living mine. Keep up the good work, a clever topic you chose to write about, it's not ordinary, the kind of topics I like...Raul