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My Dream

One thing I hope to do
I may have a chance
To get to know you
Because now that I am free
You may have a chance
To get to know me
You are a lady
A work of art
Sent from God
To fix my heart
I am a better man today
Just thought I’d tell you
If you come my way
Eyes of pretty blue
I think my dreams
Are coming true
You are all I want to see
I hope babe
You'll be with me

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Poet Destroyer A

February 28, 2016 at 10:00 AM

Steven, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A

February 28, 2016 at 4:58 PM

Thank you Steven, hope to see a new one from you soon

Steven Gerring

February 28, 2016 at 4:43 PM

Thank you LINDA, I will have a look. Steven