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My Dream

One thing I hope to do I may have a chance To get to know you Because now that I am free You may have a chance To get to know me You are a lady A work of art Sent from God To fix my heart I am a better man today Just thought I’d tell you If you come my way Eyes of pretty blue I think my dreams Are coming true You are all I want to see I hope babe You'll be with me

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2016 10:00:00 AM

Steven, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/28/2016 4:58:00 PM

Thank you Steven, hope to see a new one from you soon

Steven Gerring
Date: 2/28/2016 4:43:00 PM

Thank you LINDA, I will have a look. Steven