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I have a fine dream lakes rivers of ice cream chocolate on trees lollipop blowing in the breeze suddenly I fell into a lake of caramel and from my bed I did wake and give me a good shake if only that were true that on trees chocolate may grow

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Date: 11/24/2018 11:58:00 AM
I love the whimsical imagery of your rhythmic and deliciously beautiful dream, Sakshi. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Sakshi Das
Date: 12/2/2018 4:01:00 AM
Thanks a lot for , your comment , it means me a lot
Date: 11/17/2018 7:31:00 AM
Delightful...
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Sakshi Das
Date: 11/17/2018 8:14:00 AM
“My heart is still smiling. , thanks a lot for commenting
Date: 10/9/2018 3:47:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem. Well done :)
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Sakshi Das
Date: 10/9/2018 7:49:00 PM
Nice to hear that , thank you so much for your support
Date: 10/9/2018 12:06:00 PM
Hello Sakahi Das, so nice to meet you.This is a wonderful dream you had. If chocolate grew on trees i would join you in picking and place into a basket.Have a nice day my friend.
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Sakshi Das
Date: 10/9/2018 7:50:00 PM
Nice to meet you too sir, thanks for your wonderful comment
Date: 10/9/2018 9:41:00 AM
i fell amazing to say how can a girl of 14 yrs write poems so nicely
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Sakshi Das
Date: 10/9/2018 9:48:00 AM
I’m touched beyond words