My Dream

I have a fine dream
lakes rivers of ice cream
chocolate on trees
lollipop blowing in the breeze
suddenly I fell
into a lake of caramel
and from my bed I did wake
and give me a good shake
if only that were true
that on trees chocolate may grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
November 24, 2018 at 11:58 AM
I love the whimsical imagery of your rhythmic and deliciously beautiful dream, Sakshi. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Das Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 4:01 AM
Thanks a lot for , your comment , it means me a lot
Sands Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 3:47 PM
I enjoyed this poem. Well done :)
Das Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Nice to hear that , thank you so much for your support
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Hello Sakahi Das, so nice to meet you.This is a wonderful dream you had. If chocolate grew on trees i would join you in picking and place into a basket.Have a nice day my friend.
Das Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 7:50 PM
Nice to meet you too sir, thanks for your wonderful comment
Feranandes Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 9:41 AM
i fell amazing to say how can a girl of 14 yrs write poems so nicely
Das Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 9:48 AM
I’m touched beyond words
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