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My Dog Is Loyal Than Your Hug

It was eating, drinking and sleeping, you are yearning for I gazed at your eyes and I saw the love, I was looking for You were a hedonist whose life was replete with fun I was just a student whose pen always acts as a gun You come to me as a traveller who has nowhere to stay I felt my dream comes true since the time I say my pray You were old enough to be my companion in this way I start to make my life every time from night till the day You told me that's wrong! You are not a girl I'm thinking about I confessed myself there is something makes me dubious about You were alone as the wrecked ship for the sea I was the same like the bloom for the honey bee You belonged to a wonderland, a home of dust and sand I was much more like Alice who wants to die in your hand You touched me once that was all my pleasure I had no one before to give me such treasure You left me soon as the moon for the sun Just tell me how broken feet can go to a run? You know it when you have the next girl in your bed How unfaithful you are, I've had your name in my head You were lost yourself in the world of the fog I come to see my dog is loyal than your hug.

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Date: 3/17/2017 10:34:00 PM
Very nice Elaheh ...I am sorry to hear the story, I am hoping that is all fictional.... You are very talented... Nicely done..
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Elaheh Abdi Langaan
Date: 3/18/2017 7:50:00 AM
Hello It's really nice to meet you. surely It is a story from the society I'm living in although what my people experience affected me in a way to write such poem. It's really kind of you. best eli

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