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My problem. I see minds rather than faces. I see souls rather than races. I see futures before starts. I see darkness in hearts. I see ones second intentions I see the sadness unmentioned. I see tears as impossible. I see love as a struggle. My Solution. I take a chance for once. I just ask her to lunch. I forget about futures. I don’t think from the start. I just speak from the heart. Like I do in this poem. Take love as it goes. Wherever I roam. My Problem. I am who I am.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/23/2013 12:16:00 PM
Derek , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)
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Date: 2/18/2013 8:23:00 PM
Outstanding..
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Date: 2/5/2013 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Derek I think we all have a problem I am who I am lol xx
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:10:00 PM
Derek, a wonderful winning poem~ PD
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