Rebecca Larkin Poet Rhyme

My Dear Krystalline

Your beauty lights up the room
And you bring me to my doom
I don’t know why I’ve fallen for you
You are like an angel in my view
But as the damned and the pure
Our future is obscure

Seductive; I entrance your mind
There is nowhere you can hide
Our fate is entwined
A burning desire deep inside
I wanted to keep you away
Keep you from being the devil’s prey

I failed, and you fell
To the darkened depths of hell
Where my soul is forever burning
And I cannot stop this yearning
To make you mine
And I pique, and I pine

So forgive my weakness
And please don’t cry
In this state of bleakness
As I’m about to die
Just look away
 While my heart starts to decay

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire April 17, 2013 at 9:22 PM Dear Rebecca, YOU light up the Heart of this Rhymist, with YOUR Blue Ribbon Rhyming.The message on the dark side but extremely well written.I see YOU are Friends with Laura B. I have read half of her Magnificent POEMS. YOU two have much in common in YOUR Quills.I only recently started reading David's work.Enjoy Reading YOUR Powerful Pen. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG

Jonas L. Rozario October 24, 2012 at 10:36 AM This is really lovely....awesome rhyming. Enjoyed all 4 stanzas. Great job!!!

David William Breidenthal February 5, 2012 at 1:33 PM Ahhh! shoots, don't die!!!!!!!! - David

Laura Breidenthal December 21, 2011 at 5:28 PM JEEPERS! This rocks! D'mone: Man, I totally wrote that... Laura: SURE you did! Tsutharoth(or however yah spell it!) :*rolls black eyes* :D Always, Lauraaaaaa Rebecca Larkin December 22, 2011 at 5:09 PM hey now don't give anything away about the book :P lol *Tsustaroth