My Dear

My Dear, I tell you in words, that I love you true. Sometimes I feel that is not enough, just for you. So I am writing this letter in rhyme from my heart. Though I show you, I love you, on every days start. This is not sufficient, for one that gloriously divine. Adequate expressions are lost to describe, .love of mine. Gifts unavailable to express, all that I have received. My Dear, delivering my treasures, completely as conceived. Each night my goal, to slowly fulfill your expectations, Together our souls; will discover such exploitations.

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Date: 11/17/2009 1:46:00 PM

Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. The emotion comes through your words. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/17/2009 8:32:00 AM

You are a man who truly knows how to love and show love, Cecil. This is a beautiful profession of your affection and devotion. So romantic! Much love to you, dear friend. I've been off the Soup for a while with company, but they leave tomorrow. Love you! Carolyn

Donna Golden

Date: 11/16/2009 4:48:00 PM

Cecil, this is a romantic, earnest letter to your love. Best of luck in the contest! Hugs, Donna

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2009 3:33:00 AM

Written to a special woman in your life I hope because it expresses so well your love for her. Thanks for the comments on my poem about my the square that is my home town. It is fairly well kept but a man came into town and bought the hotel and other property put on a big show of how he was going to restore it and draw people here as tourist. He did a little work of tearing out then ran out of money. The buildings are in bankruptsy court or something or too expensive. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/12/2009 3:44:00 PM

I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration Cecil. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/12/2009 7:59:00 AM

Love and devotion is alive and well in this beautiful couplet! Best wishes for success in the contest, Cecil! ~ Love, Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 11/11/2009 11:50:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/11/2009 10:34:00 PM

Beautiful couplet Cecil, best of luck with this one...Raul