My Dear

I don't know were to begin,
I know we've committed so many sins.
You're just clouding up your mind.
Maybe I was just blind.
You never know what to say.
I guess I'm just out of my mind today.
You say you're just too confused.
I don't know if I was just used.
Because of this,I have so many thoughts inside my head.
I'm trying to figure out why I'm not dead.
It's so hard to live through this pain.
And we're here just standing under the rain.
And when your mind clears,who knows,
I might still be here waiting for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 3, 2009 at 11:04 AM
great write. i loved how every thing flowed together so well. (welcom to the soup.)
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