My Daughter's Love

My Daughter's Love

A warm smile on a perfectly shaped face
Eyes wide like the sky - only they make me feel I can fly!

Hands so gentle – they put at peace my mental
Their warm embrace is soft and smooth like lace.

They debate like loud crashing waves in a lake
With ever forgiving voices – that make my heart think twice
Before and after making all choices.

My girls give their love with meticulous precision
This helps guide me in making unselfish decisions. 

To me – living means giving to them my all
For without them, my peace, my love, my life
Mean nothing at all…

For my daughters Alaya & Saen - I LOVE YOU!
Mom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 13, 2011 at 6:54 AM
Good morning Lay, and how was your mothers day.. also Congratulations on your featured poem this week... a wonderful poem,,, take care and God bless,..p.d.
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May 9, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Lay. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Walayee
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May 8, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Congrats Lay on your featured poem this week on P.S... a wonderful write to share with us all my friend with luv...on this special day of luv..
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Two daughters, twice blessed. Nicely written. Vince
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December 24, 2010 at 7:29 AM
A superb expression of unconditional love for your daughters that you have penned here Lay!! There is nothing like the love a mother has for her children. Thanks so much for sharing this exquisite write. God Bless~Mary~
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December 3, 2010 at 5:19 AM
An exquisite love poem Lay!This love of yours is where it's at! well written. Wish more people could express that love to and for their children.
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