Bette Bavington Poet Villanelle

My Daughter Is a Mechanic

My daughter is a mechanic who is intelligent
On equipment thanks to her father who has 
Played a big hand in her development and
Her being licensed.
This was a great investment.
Everyone who brings in their equipment
Registers astonishment.
Yet, this child is filled with confidence
My daughter is a mechanic who is intelligent
Who's asking you not to let her physical 
Appearance prevent
Her from showing you she's experienced.
This was a great investment.
She needs your consent
To show the overwhelming evidence.
My daughter is a mechanic who is intelligent.
You will have a written guarantee that your
Machine will work first time with out any
Argument.
There will be no malcontent or any 
Inconvenience.
This was a great investment.
If your content
Then just maybe you'll make her your
Permanent
Female mechanic with an excellent
Rating for her fast and efficient work at
A good expense.
My daughter is a  mechanic who is intelligent
This was a great investment.

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Faraz Ajmal September 21, 2018 at 3:27 PM At the age of 23 your daughter has her own business? It is simply wow, coz I am 16 and believe me that I can't even tie my shoelaces nor can I tie my tie, or even iron my clothes, my mother do all these things for me, lol, she always say that with my current situation, my wife will never stay with me, anyways your poem was a fun to read, good luck and continue to write, I will later read some poems of yours Bette Bavington September 21, 2018 at 6:31 PM Yes she does with her dad. In the mean time I will continue to write Thank you for the visit.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 25, 2018 at 10:34 AM Great and powerful poem! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 25, 2018 at 1:37 PM Now that's impressive! (the age~not the gender) Kudos to her! :)) Bette Bavington August 25, 2018 at 12:03 PM Thank you. It means a lot to a twenty three year old who owns her own business.