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she crossed my threshold and went to his house, my only daughter, wed and his dear spouse, a girl once, a beautiful woman now, history is witness to fresh new love, said “he is my husband, I love him so”, but daddy, I will never let you go!” 1st placement Written “ 21/09/22 Bite size poem 52- contest Line Gauthier sponsored, 10 syllables each line, 6 lines, poetry soup syllable counter

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Date: 10/26/2022 7:04:00 AM
Beautiful ~ the love comes through
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Date: 10/7/2022 11:50:00 PM
Oh! So sweet.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/8/2022 3:52:00 AM
Thanks Thompson!!
Date: 9/27/2022 7:41:00 PM
Aw, so sweet, Krish! Loyalty like your daughter's is priceless. Enjoy!! ~ Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/28/2022 6:19:00 AM
Thanks Gershon! lovely to hear from you!
Date: 9/23/2022 8:16:00 AM
Krish...I have missed you. This is a really sweet little poem which I feel like your daughter will cherish for her whole life. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/24/2022 12:51:00 AM
Thanks Milton! It is good to be back! My daughter got married in India to the man she loves. Since we are all based in UK, organising a wedding in India took a lot of our time!
Date: 9/23/2022 7:36:00 AM
Krish, this poem is so sweet! Is this true? Your only daughter got married!? Many years ago, I was very close to my father - He is still my Hero! Good to see you back. Is this why you were not visible here? Best wishes ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/24/2022 12:53:00 AM
Hi Mala! Yes, She got married on 9th of September and we have all been so busy organising it! Yes, she is married and spends time between the two houses as we are only 20 minutes apart. good to hear from you. hopefully, you will see more of me here!

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