Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

My Daughter

she crossed my threshold and went to his house,
my only daughter, wed and his dear spouse,
a girl once, a beautiful woman now,
history is witness to fresh new love,
said “he is my husband, I love him so”,
but daddy, I will never let you go!”

1st placement
Written “ 21/09/22
Bite size poem 52- contest
Line Gauthier sponsored,
10 syllables each line, 6 lines,
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Line Gauthier October 26, 2022 at 7:04 AM Beautiful ~ the love comes through

Thompson Emate October 7, 2022 at 11:50 PM Oh! So sweet. Krish Radhakrishna October 8, 2022 at 3:52 AM Thanks Thompson!!

Gershon Wolf September 27, 2022 at 7:41 PM Aw, so sweet, Krish! Loyalty like your daughter's is priceless. Enjoy!! ~ Gershon Krish Radhakrishna September 28, 2022 at 6:19 AM Thanks Gershon! lovely to hear from you!

L Milton Hankins September 23, 2022 at 8:16 AM Krish...I have missed you. This is a really sweet little poem which I feel like your daughter will cherish for her whole life. Congratulations! Krish Radhakrishna September 24, 2022 at 12:51 AM Thanks Milton! It is good to be back! My daughter got married in India to the man she loves. Since we are all based in UK, organising a wedding in India took a lot of our time!

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 23, 2022 at 7:36 AM Krish, this poem is so sweet! Is this true? Your only daughter got married!? Many years ago, I was very close to my father - He is still my Hero! Good to see you back. Is this why you were not visible here? Best wishes ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna September 24, 2022 at 12:53 AM Hi Mala! Yes, She got married on 9th of September and we have all been so busy organising it! Yes, she is married and spends time between the two houses as we are only 20 minutes apart. good to hear from you. hopefully, you will see more of me here!