Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Rhyme

My Darling Blue's Rhyme Schema

VIEW THROUGH as I DREW, my darling HUE: color BLUE
TRY to FLY HIGH! HIGH! then greet HI to fluffy SKIES;
Don't SPRY, don't be SHY! Be SLY pass BY with one SIGH; 
My darling HUE: color BLUE; VIEW THROUGH as I DREW. 

To feel THRILL be STILL as you SAIL; TRAIL the TALE of blue WHALES
In blue OCEAN, see WOVEN MOTION, CHOSEN shots a GOLDEN TOKEN
A NUMBER SHUTTER of the HUNTER  is a THUNDER WONDER for LOVERS
TRAIL the TALE of blue WHALES to feel THRILL be STILL as you SAIL.

THREE SHE AGREE as EMCEES to SEE the deep blue SEA.
Feelings so GLEE 'cause it's FREE, excited together they FLEA!
With their KNIGHTS, the HEARTY gals PARTY all NIGHT long 
To SEE the deep blue SEA THREE SHE AGREE as EMCEES.

One and TWO but time FLEW; many CLUES I KNEW I GREW
OOH! There are FEW BLUES I want to STREW and BOO.
OUGHT for TAUT FOUGHT, DROP SHOT NOT to be DISTRAUGHT.
Many CLUES I KNEW I GREW, One and TWO but time FLEW.

HIDDEN in ZEN's GARDEN DEN, There TEN blue butterflies beauty GEN.
DANCING while playing then TEASING and KISSING all roseBUDS.
No blue DRUGS but BLOODS afire with some BUGS all did RUB.
There TEN blue butterflies beauty GEN, HIDDEN in ZEN's GARDEN DEN.

Despite RAINY DAYS, SHAKY KATIE delivered her blue BABY SAFELY.
God, she PLEASED as after SURGERY, LADY KATIE'S AMY join the NAVY.
Her DISEASE neither FREEZE nor CEASE her KNEES;
SHAKY KATIE delivered her blue BABY SAFELY despite RAINY DAYS.

VIEW THROUGH as I DREW, my darling HUE: color BLUE
My darling HUE: color BLUE; VIEW THROUGH as I DREW. 


(c) Olive Eloisa
5:49pm
July 02, 2014

List of rhymes used:

View, through, drew, hue,blue 
Try,fly,high,hi,skies
Spry,shy,sly,sigh

Flew,clues,two,knew,grew
Ooh,few,blues,strew,boo,
Ought; taut, fought, shot, not,distraught

Three,agree,she, emcee,sea
Glee,free. Flea,Hearty party knight, night

Hidden, Zen, garden, den, ten, gen
Dancing, playing, teasing, kissing
Drugs, blood,bugs,rosebuds,rub


Rainy, days, shaky,Katie, baby, safely
Lady, Amy, surgery, navy
Disease, freeze, cease, knees, pleased

Feel, thrill, still, sail, trail, tale, whales
Ocean, woven, motion, chosen, golden, token
Number, shutter, hunter, thunder, wonder, lover

 Rhyme Schema
Enter Poetry Contest 
placed 5th .. to God be the highest glory.. :)

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Poet Destroyer A July 15, 2014 at 6:19 PM :) PD

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2014 at 1:23 AM Olive, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 15, 2014 at 11:41 AM thank you Linda.. :) God bless LOlli sweet Linda.. :)

Faye Gibson July 11, 2014 at 1:20 PM Very good, Olive. Congratulations. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 5:14 PM Thank you Faye..:)

Paul Callus July 10, 2014 at 5:48 PM Congratulations Olive_eloi :)!!! This was not an easy contest and you were brave enough to tackle it! You did well:) coffee today...tea tomorrow:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 12, 2014 at 5:13 PM Okei coffee like some dark coffee..:) and please muffins:)

Richard Lamoureux July 10, 2014 at 7:29 AM Even the shape is interesting, a well deserved win. Congratulations Olive. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 8:42 AM thank you so much Sir chard :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 10, 2014 at 7:01 AM Real masterpiece Olive dear! Congrats on another wonderful win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 15, 2014 at 11:41 AM Thank you Dr. Upma.. :)

Tim Smith July 10, 2014 at 5:08 AM Simply outstanding my dear friend.... The flow was tremendous..... Congrats... Hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 8:40 AM thank you Tim for the tremendous comments :)

Verlena S. Walker July 9, 2014 at 11:24 PM Another masterpiece Olive. Congratulations on your win in Verlena's Rhyme Schema Contest. Verlena Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 3:58 AM Thank you Verlena for the place..:D though at first I really don't know how I'll do ..:D

Keith Merritt July 6, 2014 at 8:14 AM This is awesome. I have never used this form, but you inspire me to do so. ?? Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 10, 2014 at 3:57 AM Thank you, Keith!! Try it .. It's fun..:D

Ravi Sathasivam July 3, 2014 at 4:30 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2014 at 5:00 AM Thank You so much Ravi.. :)

Paul Callus July 2, 2014 at 5:23 PM You are courageous and daring Olive_eloi! I had one look at this contest and shied away from it....on the other hand you went for it with guns blazing!! Excellent! Good luck:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:16 PM Thank you.. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:15 PM weeeeeee.. :D!!! maybe this effect of my happy hormones PAul.. :D but wait wait!! i with fingers on lips hope i get the instructions right.. :D

Shadow Hamilton July 2, 2014 at 5:07 PM brilliant Olive no one would know English is not your first language. very impressive write hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:13 PM thank you Shadow.. :D but i hope I understood the instructions well :O

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2014 at 4:59 PM this is gorgeously written I'm glad I found these lines - so clear and raw . eloi!... great work!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:12 PM Thank you NEtte.. :) GBU

Casarah Nance July 2, 2014 at 3:56 PM wowee girl, step by step, the rhyming in perfect timing, so many blues used in such a variety it reads like a winner to me! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 2, 2014 at 8:11 PM :D? i really am not sure Casarah but I am just hoping that what i did will say that I understand her instructions.. :O as until now its still not clear to me. :D