My Darling Blue's Rhyme Schema

VIEW THROUGH as I DREW, my darling HUE: color BLUE TRY to FLY HIGH! HIGH! then greet HI to fluffy SKIES; Don't SPRY, don't be SHY! Be SLY pass BY with one SIGH; My darling HUE: color BLUE; VIEW THROUGH as I DREW. To feel THRILL be STILL as you SAIL; TRAIL the TALE of blue WHALES In blue OCEAN, see WOVEN MOTION, CHOSEN shots a GOLDEN TOKEN A NUMBER SHUTTER of the HUNTER is a THUNDER WONDER for LOVERS TRAIL the TALE of blue WHALES to feel THRILL be STILL as you SAIL. THREE SHE AGREE as EMCEES to SEE the deep blue SEA. Feelings so GLEE 'cause it's FREE, excited together they FLEA! With their KNIGHTS, the HEARTY gals PARTY all NIGHT long To SEE the deep blue SEA THREE SHE AGREE as EMCEES. One and TWO but time FLEW; many CLUES I KNEW I GREW OOH! There are FEW BLUES I want to STREW and BOO. OUGHT for TAUT FOUGHT, DROP SHOT NOT to be DISTRAUGHT. Many CLUES I KNEW I GREW, One and TWO but time FLEW. HIDDEN in ZEN's GARDEN DEN, There TEN blue butterflies beauty GEN. DANCING while playing then TEASING and KISSING all roseBUDS. No blue DRUGS but BLOODS afire with some BUGS all did RUB. There TEN blue butterflies beauty GEN, HIDDEN in ZEN's GARDEN DEN. Despite RAINY DAYS, SHAKY KATIE delivered her blue BABY SAFELY. God, she PLEASED as after SURGERY, LADY KATIE'S AMY join the NAVY. Her DISEASE neither FREEZE nor CEASE her KNEES; SHAKY KATIE delivered her blue BABY SAFELY despite RAINY DAYS. VIEW THROUGH as I DREW, my darling HUE: color BLUE My darling HUE: color BLUE; VIEW THROUGH as I DREW. (c) Olive Eloisa 5:49pm July 02, 2014 List of rhymes used: View, through, drew, hue,blue Try,fly,high,hi,skies Spry,shy,sly,sigh Flew,clues,two,knew,grew Ooh,few,blues,strew,boo, Ought; taut, fought, shot, not,distraught Three,agree,she, emcee,sea Glee,free. Flea,Hearty party knight, night Hidden, Zen, garden, den, ten, gen Dancing, playing, teasing, kissing Drugs, blood,bugs,rosebuds,rub Rainy, days, shaky,Katie, baby, safely Lady, Amy, surgery, navy Disease, freeze, cease, knees, pleased Feel, thrill, still, sail, trail, tale, whales Ocean, woven, motion, chosen, golden, token Number, shutter, hunter, thunder, wonder, lover Rhyme Schema Enter Poetry Contest placed 5th .. to God be the highest glory.. :)
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Date: 7/15/2014 6:19:00 PM
:) PD
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Date: 7/14/2014 1:23:00 AM
Olive, Congratulations, on your awesome win. Love Linda
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2014 11:41:00 AM
thank you Linda.. :) God bless LOlli sweet Linda.. :)
Date: 7/11/2014 1:20:00 PM
Very good, Olive. Congratulations.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/12/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thank you Faye..:)
Date: 7/10/2014 5:48:00 PM
Congratulations Olive_eloi :)!!! This was not an easy contest and you were brave enough to tackle it! You did well:) coffee today...tea tomorrow:) // paul
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Date: 7/12/2014 5:13:00 PM
Okei coffee like some dark coffee..:) and please muffins:)
Date: 7/10/2014 7:29:00 AM
Even the shape is interesting, a well deserved win. Congratulations Olive.
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Date: 7/10/2014 8:42:00 AM
thank you so much Sir chard :)
Date: 7/10/2014 7:01:00 AM
Real masterpiece Olive dear! Congrats on another wonderful win!
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Date: 7/15/2014 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma.. :)
Date: 7/10/2014 5:08:00 AM
Simply outstanding my dear friend.... The flow was tremendous..... Congrats... Hugs Tim
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Date: 7/10/2014 8:40:00 AM
thank you Tim for the tremendous comments :)
Date: 7/9/2014 11:24:00 PM
Another masterpiece Olive. Congratulations on your win in Verlena's Rhyme Schema Contest. Verlena
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Date: 7/10/2014 3:58:00 AM
Thank you Verlena for the place..:D though at first I really don't know how I'll do ..:D
Date: 7/6/2014 8:14:00 AM
This is awesome. I have never used this form, but you inspire me to do so. ??
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Date: 7/10/2014 3:57:00 AM
Thank you, Keith!! Try it .. It's fun..:D
Date: 7/3/2014 4:30:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 7/3/2014 5:00:00 AM
Thank You so much Ravi.. :)
Date: 7/2/2014 5:23:00 PM
You are courageous and daring Olive_eloi! I had one look at this contest and shied away from it....on the other hand you went for it with guns blazing!! Excellent! Good luck:) // paul
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:16:00 PM
Thank you.. :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:15:00 PM
weeeeeee.. :D!!! maybe this effect of my happy hormones PAul.. :D but wait wait!! i with fingers on lips hope i get the instructions right.. :D
Date: 7/2/2014 5:07:00 PM
brilliant Olive no one would know English is not your first language. very impressive write hugs
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 8:13:00 PM
thank you Shadow.. :D but i hope I understood the instructions well :O
Date: 7/2/2014 4:59:00 PM
this is gorgeously written I'm glad I found these lines - so clear and raw . eloi!... great work!.. huggs
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:12:00 PM
Thank you NEtte.. :) GBU
Date: 7/2/2014 3:56:00 PM
wowee girl, step by step, the rhyming in perfect timing, so many blues used in such a variety it reads like a winner to me! :)
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:11:00 PM
:D? i really am not sure Casarah but I am just hoping that what i did will say that I understand her instructions.. :O as until now its still not clear to me. :D
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