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Written 14th March 2025

Write five beautiful lines, poetry contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France 

My Darling Beau

Love is alike the green grass of home, in heart and mind where’er one may roam. Quote - Poet’s own Moonlight and roses remind me of you Birdsong in the morning and sunshine too The rain when it falls and soft winds that blow All things are heightened upon the earth’s show Love has changed everything, my darling beau.
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Crandall Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 3:16 PM
Beautiful lines Beryl!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 24, 2025 at 5:00 PM
Thank you David… Beryl
May Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 7:37 AM
Lovely write Beryl, best wishes
Edmonds  Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 7:52 PM
Thank you Joseph, much appreciated… Beryl
Empress Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Awn this is so beautiful! Made me smile and my soul warm dear beryl! How sweet and beautiful is the way youv woven this poem, and the rhymes as always are so sublime! I really love the cadence and poetic nature of your word weaving and how you always express in such a sincere and soulful manner! Every word in this is stunning! Best wishes if for a contest. Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
Edmonds  Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 7:51 PM
Thank you Ink, your lovely reply has given me a much needed lift. I truly appreciate every word… Beryl
Buhagiar Avatar
March 17, 2025 at 3:45 AM
A great win. One could almost sing this poem.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 22, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Thank you Victor, that’s a nice thought, to sing these words… Beryl
Beaufort Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 6:09 PM
Beryl, super nice! This feeling is what makes life worth living! Smiles!! I can see why people come and read your work on a regular basis. I should try to be a better follower too!!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:36 PM
Thank you Duke, very much appreciated. There are many fantastic poets writing on the soup, but not enough time in the day to read and comment on them all, as much as we’d like too… Beryl
Poet Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 1:18 PM
Those are five fantastic lines Beryl, the quote and poem are so exquisite. Congratulations on your win.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:26 PM
Thank you Sotto, truly grateful… Beryl
Seeker Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your inevitable win!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:24 PM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker, appreciated… Beryl
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:43 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Beryl :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:22 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) hugs returned, Beryl
mysore Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 2:42 AM
awwn! congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 9:20 PM
Thank you thriveni, very much indeed… Beryl
Read Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 11:32 AM
Love your poem sister Beryl, wish you well in the contest.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Thank you and bless you brother John… Beryl
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 9:07 AM
The bond of love you have for each other can never be broken, love your quote too Beryl, good luck in the contest. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 1:44 PM
Thank you Tom, what you say is true, I know it’s the same for you and yours too… Beryl
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 8:39 AM
aww what a delight to read Beryl, I struggle with writing romantic poems, this is a little gem:-) hugs jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Thank you Jan, love is what flows from the heart, over and over again, a gem that doesn’t need a pen. Hugs returned :-) Beryl xx
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 3:01 AM
- A beautiful poem, Beryl :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 3:17 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Hugs returned… Beryl x
M  Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 2:51 AM
Beryl that is one of the most beautiful little love poems/tribute ever! Simple, uncomplicated and just lovely! Debx
Edmonds  Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 3:15 AM
Thank you so much Deb, I meant every word even though many years have passed, since we were lad and lass… Beryl x
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