Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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My Darling

(Rhyme) 


My Darling you make my heart beat so fast 
Just racing within me each time hear from you at last 
You have not the faintest idea at all the way 
That you make me feel from head to toes each day 

You've changed so many things very deep in me 
Well with you I feel more alive now than ever you see 
That's because you live in my heart forever 
And in the very deepest of my mind now forever and ever. 

My heart races so fast and because of you I get so warm 
In my mind just thinking of you I feel so good in every form 
How great it is that you make me feel oh like this all the way 
And that in my heart and soul with me I always just have you. 

Here in my heart no matter what I'm always smiling 
And day and night I just release to you all my loving 
Daydreaming of just kissing your very chocolate lips so sweet 
Your sexy lips that are just waiting for me oh what a treat! 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014 


November,24,2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 25, 2014 at 9:15 AM Beautifully expressive and so full of love...I enjoyed reading this morning. Hugs, Rhonda Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 10:11 AM Hi Rhoda, my dear friend ! Yes, it is. Thank you so kindly for dropping by and all. Much appreciated! :) have a lovely day! Love and hugs! xxx D.

Ankit Sampat November 25, 2014 at 2:22 AM Beautiful write Dorian. A poem full of love and feelings. A perfect 7 from me :D. Loads of Love - Ankit Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 2:35 AM My dear friend Ankit, thank you so kindly for stopping by and for your very awesome comments every time. Much appreciated. Have a very wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Eve Roper November 25, 2014 at 1:43 AM Dorian, an other wonderful write, :) Blessings to you and have a very Happy Thanksgiving eve Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 1:46 AM Hello Eve! Thank you so much for stopping by my dear friend! And Happy Thanksgiving to you too! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Tim Smith November 24, 2014 at 10:32 PM What a treat that kiss would be...beautiful... Hugs Tim Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 1:49 AM Tim, my dear friend, thank you for stopping by you're so kind. Happy Thanksgiving Day to you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Gary Bateman November 24, 2014 at 3:39 PM "D" I love the picture you posted with this poem!! You always do so much with your pictures in support of your most wonderful prose. I am truly in awe of many of your romance narratives because you have a most subtle and palpable way of enticing the reader into the very fabric and ink of your script as you enchant and enrapture the reader with the sublime emotive power of your verses!! Very Well-Done My Dear!! A Big 7++++ from me and this one's in my FAV Book!! Best Always "D" -- Gary Gary Bateman November 25, 2014 at 3:42 PM "D" Have a Happy Thanksgiving too back there in the States!! My wife (Ingrid) and I celebrate this holiday each year over here in Germany as we did when we were both living back in the States. Best Wishes Always!! Gary Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 1:59 AM My very dear friend Gary, thank you so much for stopping by and all your kindness. You're so sweet to me! I wish you a very Happy Thanksgiving Day! I know for a fact that most Americans we celebrate it in Germany. Have a very wonderful day! ;) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Jack Ellison November 24, 2014 at 3:25 PM You write so magically when it comes to poems about love! What a loving heart you possess... a 7+++ Love, love love! XXX Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 1:52 AM Thank you Jack my dear friend, thank you for all, you're so sweet. Have a lovely day! :) love and hugs! xxx D.

David Meade November 24, 2014 at 3:22 PM Chocolate lips . . . now that does sound delicious!! Awesome job my dear friend! Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 2:05 AM David my dear friend, thank you very kindly for stopping by and all! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Cherl Dunn November 24, 2014 at 12:53 PM Dorian, this is a poem of hot passion burning out of control girl, wow this sizzles to the point of spontanious combusion great job here, and thanks for your comment on my wolves I just love this creatures of the wild country. cheri Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 2:03 AM My dear friend Cheryl thank you so very kindly for dropping by and all! Much appreciated your comments. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Jan Allison November 24, 2014 at 11:58 AM oh what a wonderful tender romantic poem- great imagery and lovely rhyme - its a 7 from me Dorian! Hugs jan xxx Dorian Petersen Potter November 25, 2014 at 1:55 AM Thank you so kindly Jan my dear friend for dropping by! Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! Xxxx D.