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(Rhyme) My Darling you make my heart beat so fast Just racing within me each time hear from you at last You have not the faintest idea at all the way That you make me feel from head to toes each day You've changed so many things very deep in me Well with you I feel more alive now than ever you see That's because you live in my heart forever And in the very deepest of my mind now forever and ever. My heart races so fast and because of you I get so warm In my mind just thinking of you I feel so good in every form How great it is that you make me feel oh like this all the way And that in my heart and soul with me I always just have you. Here in my heart no matter what I'm always smiling And day and night I just release to you all my loving Daydreaming of just kissing your very chocolate lips so sweet Your sexy lips that are just waiting for me oh what a treat! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,24,2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/25/2014 9:15:00 AM

Beautifully expressive and so full of love...I enjoyed reading this morning. Hugs, Rhonda

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 10:11:00 AM

Hi Rhoda, my dear friend ! Yes, it is. Thank you so kindly for dropping by and all. Much appreciated! :) have a lovely day! Love and hugs! xxx D.

Ankit Sampat

Date: 11/25/2014 2:22:00 AM

Beautiful write Dorian. A poem full of love and feelings. A perfect 7 from me :D. Loads of Love - Ankit

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 2:35:00 AM

My dear friend Ankit, thank you so kindly for stopping by and for your very awesome comments every time. Much appreciated. Have a very wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/25/2014 1:43:00 AM

Dorian, an other wonderful write, :) Blessings to you and have a very Happy Thanksgiving eve

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 1:46:00 AM

Hello Eve! Thank you so much for stopping by my dear friend! And Happy Thanksgiving to you too! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/24/2014 10:32:00 PM

What a treat that kiss would be...beautiful... Hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 1:49:00 AM

Tim, my dear friend, thank you for stopping by you're so kind. Happy Thanksgiving Day to you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/24/2014 3:39:00 PM

"D" I love the picture you posted with this poem!! You always do so much with your pictures in support of your most wonderful prose. I am truly in awe of many of your romance narratives because you have a most subtle and palpable way of enticing the reader into the very fabric and ink of your script as you enchant and enrapture the reader with the sublime emotive power of your verses!! Very Well-Done My Dear!! A Big 7++++ from me and this one's in my FAV Book!! Best Always "D" -- Gary

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/25/2014 3:42:00 PM

"D" Have a Happy Thanksgiving too back there in the States!! My wife (Ingrid) and I celebrate this holiday each year over here in Germany as we did when we were both living back in the States. Best Wishes Always!! Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 1:59:00 AM

My very dear friend Gary, thank you so much for stopping by and all your kindness. You're so sweet to me! I wish you a very Happy Thanksgiving Day! I know for a fact that most Americans we celebrate it in Germany. Have a very wonderful day! ;) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/24/2014 3:25:00 PM

You write so magically when it comes to poems about love! What a loving heart you possess... a 7+++ Love, love love! XXX

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 1:52:00 AM

Thank you Jack my dear friend, thank you for all, you're so sweet. Have a lovely day! :) love and hugs! xxx D.

David Meade

Date: 11/24/2014 3:22:00 PM

Chocolate lips . . . now that does sound delicious!! Awesome job my dear friend!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 2:05:00 AM

David my dear friend, thank you very kindly for stopping by and all! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/24/2014 12:53:00 PM

Dorian, this is a poem of hot passion burning out of control girl, wow this sizzles to the point of spontanious combusion great job here, and thanks for your comment on my wolves I just love this creatures of the wild country. cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 2:03:00 AM

My dear friend Cheryl thank you so very kindly for dropping by and all! Much appreciated your comments. :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/24/2014 11:58:00 AM

oh what a wonderful tender romantic poem- great imagery and lovely rhyme - its a 7 from me Dorian! Hugs jan xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/25/2014 1:55:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Jan my dear friend for dropping by! Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! Xxxx D.