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My Daddy Strongest

Blind faith and adulation See it in the eyes of a child My daddy strongest, she says Words setting off tempests wild If the child is immature then so are we Jesus, Buddha, Krishna ~ who’s the best Each saint we know walked the path alone Why then do we carry their load on our chest 26-April-2023

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/26/2023 9:17:00 AM

I enjoyed your write. Kids look up to adults. Love your line, "My daddy strongest, she says." Have a great/blessed day............

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 4/26/2023 1:38:00 PM

As Oscar Wilde once observed, “I was born too late to be original!” ~ it’s a commonly used adage, I think, ‘my daddy strongest’. Have a great day, Paula