Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

My Daddy Strongest

Blind faith and adulation 
See it in the eyes of a child
My daddy strongest, she says
Words setting off tempests wild

If the child is immature then so are we
Jesus, Buddha, Krishna ~ who’s the best
Each saint we know walked the path alone
Why then do we carry their load on our chest

26-April-2023

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Paula Goldsmith April 26, 2023 at 9:17 AM I enjoyed your write. Kids look up to adults. Love your line, "My daddy strongest, she says." Have a great/blessed day............ Unseeking Seeker April 26, 2023 at 1:38 PM As Oscar Wilde once observed, “I was born too late to be original!” ~ it’s a commonly used adage, I think, ‘my daddy strongest’. Have a great day, Paula