Stan Bridge Poet Rhyme

My Dad Hates Me

My dad hates me hes always on my case
Morning noon and night hes always in my face
Clean your room up its just not fair
Straighten up your tie do something with your hair
And if its not my dad its my mum
Put a smile on your face you always look so glum
Well i aint got much to smile about i say
Well she says do as your told and everything will be ok
So i sulk stamp my feet go to my room to be on my own
Thinking about it though im 32 
Think its time i left home

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John Loving Iii January 6, 2011 at 11:49 AM i know it's hard son but try harder. jhl

Carol Sunshine Brown January 5, 2011 at 4:39 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Stan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol