My Dad

an ambitious personality,
comes your way,
when my dad walks d red carpet.
his goals are ready,
his mind is alwayz set.
he loves his loved ones
his love is weighed in tons
he is sweet
he is the kind,
to pull a sheet
on a sleeping person.
his life lives in his daughters
and his success is his girls
his love is in three
two daughters and wife
he is a man 
guarenteed you will never see!
his emotions are straight 
he is handsome and dashing
and soft and cuddley
he is my best buddy!
he will do anything 
for me,
i know
because THAT he
is my father,
whom i love more than me

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Carrie Richards

Date: 8/29/2008 5:53:00 PM

What a blessing to have a dad like this...I am so glad for you! I loved the one line especially...."he is the kind to pull a sheet on a sleeping person"...that is so observant, and I can picture it clearly. My husband is that kind of father to our children (now grown), and still is that kind of man with his grandchildren. Aren't we the lucky ones??! Blessings...Carrie