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My Critical Circumstance

Looking at the world In a kaleidoscope of color Vivid and fleeting Every shade filled with hope of bliss. Laden with heartache After ages of pain and grief, Uncertainty of a 'forever' Glancing eerily at me, Heading for a breakdown that I would never succumb to. Leaving behind yesterday and its bitterness, Orbing to a height unreached Violently fighting to kill the catalyst that motions the meltdown... Ever after in your eyes... Love has conquered my critical circumstance.

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Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/14/2010 6:54:00 AM

Love conquers all because love forces us to accept things, and people as well, for what they are and not for what we want them to be. And if it's not so then I submit that's it's not love but something else. Sometimes, after the rose colored glasses are stripped away, love will dictate that we should just let go and set the wild bird free, and sometimes not. Good luck in the contest! And thank you for your comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/13/2010 9:34:00 PM

That last line really laid it all out, Wilma. Good luck in the contest with this fine writing. See ya, LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2010 1:54:00 PM

Just a wonderful Acrostic entry for Tirzah's contest Wilma... good luck ..its full of emotion.. thankxxx for your comment and I did frame the poem I wrote for my grand babies when the last one was born.. I used to do that for a living and still dabble in it ..it was my side hobby/business plus my two jobs and four sons..haha.. busy busy.. so they do treasure it .. and they are the best thing in my life right now cept for my fiance' ..thankxx with luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/13/2010 12:03:00 PM

the human struggles well written in this poem, sad though!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2010 8:24:00 AM

Good morning Wilma, a nice and enjoyable poem. You have the most beautiful entrance to a poem here. I love the way you view the world thru a kaleidoscope of color...A loy to have read that part.But the rest of your poem is deep and strong..Wow!! the way you changed the form to the truth of reality. Enjoyed,..p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/13/2010 7:18:00 AM

Such a wonderful acrostic Wilma! Quite vivid in your descriptions here-- very nice!! :) -- nikko :) haha btw-- those men that you sent?? they never arrived :p hahahha

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 7:06:00 AM

If you have found a way to leave the pain and grief of yesterday behind, then truly love has "conquered" your critical circumstance. Best wishes for success in the contest with this heartfelt poem, Wilma. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2010 6:00:00 AM

Great work that you have penned this morn..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 7/13/2010 5:50:00 AM

Great Acrostic! Hope your entering it in the contest. Nicely written and very original and emotionally driven. Thanks for your kind comments. Have a wonderful day! Scarlett