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My Cousin Smudge

She was short-spoken, curt, and abrupt. Her tight ears were closed, her mouth was cupped. Not unlike her dad, ole mean McDuff. She told it like it was, spoke her mind. More honest girl you would never find. I’d want her to back me in a bind. She speaks the brutal truth, you see. Even if it angers Ted and me. A solid case of integrity. She will probably be a lawyer or judge. Speaking the truth, she will never fudge. Curt and abrupt, my cousin Smudge.

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Date: 12/1/2019 9:19:00 PM
Wait, hold the presses! You just associated 'truth' with the word lawyer! … I guess either we know different breeds of lawyers --- or this is the ultimate 'lawyer joke!' LOL. Enjoyed, Gershon
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2019 8:51:00 AM
I do not know any lawyers who did not stop being lawyers actually - preferring to sell things like insurance and annuities.
Date: 12/1/2019 9:27:00 AM
Sometimes we need people like Smudge to keep us straight.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/2/2019 8:52:00 AM
And she is ready to come visit. Just send her your address.

Book: Shattered Sighs