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My Concrete Haven

Most cry all night without making a sound, but I'm the only one that feels blessed for what I have found. The distant stares into a world that is unsound;The joy I will feel when I am homeward bound. The steel that contains my body is very heavy; my thoughts will always be steady.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/5/2016 2:58:00 AM
STILL LOVING THIS ONE. SKAT
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:42:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Michael. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:49:00 AM
this sounds like a riddle to me i shall have to solve it luv*Skat
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Date: 5/30/2011 9:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry tonight.. hope u enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 5/30/2011 4:18:00 PM
welcome to the poetry soup,..I'm also a little new here just a month ago when i first join this wonderful group of extraordinary poets! may you also read my poems,..thanks...soon i want to read more from you! see you... ----junjun
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