My Coming of Age

I wasn’t young – but not that old
I looked down – my blood ran cold
I spied a single little hair
That yesterday just wasn’t there
I thought to show it to my mother
But thinking that just made me shudder
I don’t think she would understand
After all she’s not a man
I’d show it to the guys I know
But they’d just laugh so that’s no-go
I don’t want to wait till I get more
Though I’m sure there’s more in store
So I’m turning to my friends on Soup
At least those in my own age group
And hope that one of them will care
To hear about my grey chest hair

Mdailey 	2/7/12
For Frank Herra's Coming of Age Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 2, 2012 at 9:19 PM
MIKE
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February 27, 2012 at 5:13 PM
very funny! i love the clever surprise at the end.
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations in the"Coming Of Age" contest Mike. Love, Carol
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February 27, 2012 at 9:38 AM
cxongrats Mike on an amazimg win for this excellent entry and creative write luv..
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February 7, 2012 at 8:30 PM
This is too funny, Mike! thanks for the laugh! Love, Kim
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:01 PM
hahahahaha. VERY GOOD, Mike. For a minute there I thought the guy wanting a play date was maybe only 12 years old!!!
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