Brian Strand Poet Didactic

Notes About The Poem

Organic is how Hilda Morley described her open living visual form..here is my clip of her Sea Lily https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=G7T7t3zuVMc

and here is my open form version of this genre

My Choice Organic

fixity or flux
in the
 evasion of monotony
a linear turn
    to integrity
in phrasal inflections
scanning language
         in signature verse

internal sounds
     made prominent with
divergent voices
       random shapes
on the
    theatre of the page

circumstance
      leavened by
          understanding
at points of departure
into floods
    of the experimental
in a inherent
         impulse
an antithesis
of the
     ambivalent
dislocated
   by emotion
distracted by
           banalities
sesoned with tradition

a spontaneous
        cycle of seasons
the heritage 
   of life blooms
a sentiment
      of trees
in a rare
    but natural voice
eternally alive
in an annual
  renaissance
     of precedents
where
caution passes by
 style detours in disguise
shameless
   in deceit
sly&aloof
prudence laid aside
a
  transfigured folly
yet
   volatile
& naive
an antecedent
  of
    a
    genteel
       future

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