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Organic is how Hilda Morley described her open living visual form..here is my clip of her Sea Lily https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=G7T7t3zuVMc

and here is my open form version of this genre

fixity or flux in the evasion of monotony a linear turn to integrity in phrasal inflections scanning language in signature verse internal sounds made prominent with divergent voices random shapes on the theatre of the page circumstance leavened by understanding at points of departure into floods of the experimental in a inherent impulse an antithesis of the ambivalent dislocated by emotion distracted by banalities sesoned with tradition a spontaneous cycle of seasons the heritage of life blooms a sentiment of trees in a rare but natural voice eternally alive in an annual renaissance of precedents where caution passes by style detours in disguise shameless in deceit sly&aloof prudence laid aside a transfigured folly yet volatile & naive an antecedent of a genteel future

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