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BANTU an imagist couplet Each line a compete idea,the 2nd however constrasts with a complementary description or explanation or metaphor thereof

My Choice Bantu

A sea mist rolls inshore this morning
The optician proposes a cataract op
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Cleverly written, Brian, after having both my eyes lasered, mist begone but alas, my right eye misses the mist, ergo, upcoming surgeries will I finally fully view the shore again, Aloha!
Strand Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 9:12 AM
Hopefully William,stay creative Cheers
Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 6:47 AM
Cute one. I got a chuckle. Those cataracts can make everything cloudy. I have already gone by that way and can see but it is not perfect. Sara
Strand Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 7:06 AM
Bless you Sara.
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