My Choice

While "Dancing In The Rain" with my "Forbidden Love"
A "Wind Song"  of "Tranquility" flourished the air.
The faint "Whispers" that "Breathe" down from above
Have "Haunted" the "Dual Inspiration" we desparately share.

These "Sinful" "Disires" "My Dearest Friend"
May be "The Test"  that will "Set Me Free".
For these "Stolen Moments Of Temptations" must end
As your "Spirit Of A Kiss" induces my "Sultry Needs".

Under a "Ruby" "Boo-Ya Moon" "The Sacrifice" is truly fate
"Fond Memories" are doused slowly with "Happy Tears".
My "Forbidden Love" sadly ended with my "Soulmate"
Yet...the "Fairytale Love" remains throughout all years.

Contest~Adam Hapworth~ "It's all in the titles"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Jones Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 9:46 PM
Congratulations.. nice job....
Anglesey Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 6:44 AM
The titles fit together so well to create a magical poem. Congratulations on your win :)
Morgan Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 8:02 PM
nicely done...congrats on your win :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:45 PM
very well done, I like the cohesiveness of yours with the titles used. Congrats for your win.
A   Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 3:25 PM
Hi Maggie, a nice winning poem... Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 2:41 PM
So well thought out and I love the feel of the piece. Congratulations! I like the Ruby Boo-Ya Moon.
Macfarlane Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Cleverly done, love the story your titles told. Well done! Big congrats. Hugs
Posey Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Congratulations on a well crafted entry.. It flows perfectly and is most deserving of your win.... Jake
A  Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 7:25 AM
Hi Maggie, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~
Carroll Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Hi Maggie, Nicely crafted and creative write... Regards, Ken
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