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While "Dancing In The Rain" with my "Forbidden Love" A "Wind Song" of "Tranquility" flourished the air. The faint "Whispers" that "Breathe" down from above Have "Haunted" the "Dual Inspiration" we desparately share. These "Sinful" "Disires" "My Dearest Friend" May be "The Test" that will "Set Me Free". For these "Stolen Moments Of Temptations" must end As your "Spirit Of A Kiss" induces my "Sultry Needs". Under a "Ruby" "Boo-Ya Moon" "The Sacrifice" is truly fate "Fond Memories" are doused slowly with "Happy Tears". My "Forbidden Love" sadly ended with my "Soulmate" Yet...the "Fairytale Love" remains throughout all years. Contest~Adam Hapworth~ "It's all in the titles"

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Date: 9/9/2013 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations.. nice job....
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Date: 9/6/2013 6:44:00 AM
The titles fit together so well to create a magical poem. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:14:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:02:00 PM
nicely done...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:45:00 PM
very well done, I like the cohesiveness of yours with the titles used. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 9/5/2013 3:25:00 PM
Hi Maggie, a nice winning poem... Linda
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:41:00 PM
So well thought out and I love the feel of the piece. Congratulations! I like the Ruby Boo-Ya Moon.
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Date: 9/5/2013 10:58:00 AM
Cleverly done, love the story your titles told. Well done! Big congrats. Hugs
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Date: 9/5/2013 9:58:00 AM
Congratulations on a well crafted entry.. It flows perfectly and is most deserving of your win.... Jake
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Date: 9/5/2013 7:25:00 AM
Hi Maggie, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/28/2013 8:18:00 PM
Hi Maggie, Nicely crafted and creative write... Regards, Ken
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