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My Child

Will you kindly show me your sympathy? I am so lonely and helpless today. You're my baby once, I'd shown empathy. Will you kindly show me your sympathy? I had felt your pains by telepathy, I do not know, today, you feel that way. Will you kindly show me your sympathy? I am so lonely and helpless today. “Honor your father and mother” (This is the first commandment with a promise) (Ephesians 6:2) 21 May 2021 Try a Triolet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/26/2021 6:25:00 AM

Christuraj, this lovely poem brought tears to my eyes. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/25/2021 8:16:00 PM

Christuraj, this really tugs on your heart strings. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/26/2021 1:28:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2021 12:40:00 PM

Sometimes our children can break our hearts, but we always love them unconditionally just the same. A lovely lovely poem. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/25/2021 2:05:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/25/2021 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Christuraj. You have expressed your quote with eloquence. Blessings.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/24/2021 11:26:00 PM

WoW! Christuraj, What a well written and heartfelt about honoring your parents. I can picture an elderly woman who has been neglected by her grown child. It is so sad. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-)Alexis

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/25/2021 3:00:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 5/22/2021 2:06:00 PM

Nice questions tat I wish I had the nerve to actually speak out. As it is I can only ask of my pup and she Does answer. Hugs and blessing, Christuraj!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/24/2021 10:32:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2021 5:48:00 PM

A yearning for closeness!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/20/2021 11:01:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 3:10:00 PM

aww Christuraj this is so sad on so many levels, i hope its not written from personal experience:-( hugs jan xx

Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/20/2021 10:59:00 PM

Thank you very much.