Christuraj Alex Poet Triolet

My Child

Will you kindly show me your sympathy?
I am so lonely and helpless today.
You're my baby once, I'd shown empathy.
Will you kindly show me your sympathy?
I had felt your pains by telepathy,
I do not know, today, you feel that way.
Will you kindly show me your sympathy?
I am so lonely and helpless today.

“Honor your father and mother” (This is the first commandment with a promise)
(Ephesians 6:2)

21 May 2021
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Janice Canerdy May 26, 2021 at 6:25 AM Christuraj, this lovely poem brought tears to my eyes. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Kim Merryman May 25, 2021 at 8:16 PM Christuraj, this really tugs on your heart strings. Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Christuraj Alex May 26, 2021 at 1:28 AM Thank you very much.

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2021 at 12:40 PM Sometimes our children can break our hearts, but we always love them unconditionally just the same. A lovely lovely poem. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo Christuraj Alex May 25, 2021 at 2:05 PM Thank you very much.

Sam Kauffman May 25, 2021 at 11:25 AM Congratulations on your win Christuraj. You have expressed your quote with eloquence. Blessings.

Alexis Y. May 24, 2021 at 11:26 PM WoW! Christuraj, What a well written and heartfelt about honoring your parents. I can picture an elderly woman who has been neglected by her grown child. It is so sad. Congratulations on a well deserved win:-)Alexis Christuraj Alex May 25, 2021 at 3:00 AM Thank you very much.

Sally Eslinger May 22, 2021 at 2:06 PM Nice questions tat I wish I had the nerve to actually speak out. As it is I can only ask of my pup and she Does answer. Hugs and blessing, Christuraj! Christuraj Alex May 24, 2021 at 10:32 PM Thank you very much.

Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2021 at 5:48 PM A yearning for closeness! Christuraj Alex May 20, 2021 at 11:01 PM Thank you very much.

Jan Allison May 20, 2021 at 3:10 PM aww Christuraj this is so sad on so many levels, i hope its not written from personal experience:-( hugs jan xx Christuraj Alex May 20, 2021 at 10:59 PM Thank you very much.