My Chance

Not talking to you gets easier everyday Like a scar fading away And the memory of you Is better than talking to you, yourself I've chained you up Put you on a shelf I don't feel anything Is that good? This numbness gives me more peace than you ever could I don't want you anymore Is that understood? Gave you too many chances than I should You were never good for me I was blind then But now I see Now I have MY chance My chance to be free

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 2:26:00 AM

Caleah Buil, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA**

Timothy Hicks

Date: 12/14/2014 2:15:00 AM

It's great that you're moving on to bigger and better things, Caleah. Though the fact that you gave that person "too many chances" is, I believe, a sign of better character than not giving a person enough of a shot. To be a little naive, concerning relationships with others, is better than being a little cold. Great lyric!

Caleah Buil
Date: 12/31/2014 2:42:00 PM

Yeah, I agree. However people always tell me my greatest weakness is, I'm "too nice". So sometimes even when people may use me or not treat me as well as they should; I always give them abundant of chances, especially when they hurt me and do it on purpose. Have to learn a balance on finally cutting them loose. Thanks for the comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/2/2014 2:36:00 PM

deep and sad but you are moving on - go for it girl!:-( Hugs Jan xx

Caleah Buil
Date: 12/4/2014 11:41:00 AM

Thank you!!!! I am! :) Proud of myself too. *Hugs*

Darlene Gifford

Date: 12/2/2014 2:04:00 PM

Well expressed! Blessings, Darlene