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My Cerebellum

the cerebral mist 
mysteriously complex
where the spirit lives

Senryu on Mind Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas
1/28/20

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Anne-Lise Andresen

February 5, 2020 at 4:20 AM

- Congratulations on a well done 3rd place in the contest, Timothy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire

February 5, 2020 at 4:21 PM

Thank you so much Sunshine!

Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2020 at 3:26 PM

I like this. I wonder if that is really where the spirit lives or if it is just an aura inside our body. a mystery of the universe.

Timothy Mcguire

February 4, 2020 at 3:45 PM

Good question Andrea. I think it starts in the mind and projects outward like a bubble

Jenish Somadas

February 4, 2020 at 12:36 AM

Mind is a mystery...Congrats on your great win in the contest Timothy..

Timothy Mcguire

February 4, 2020 at 11:44 AM

Thank you so much Jenish

Tom Cunningham

January 29, 2020 at 5:52 AM

Nice senyru Timothy. Good luck. Tom

Timothy Mcguire

January 29, 2020 at 1:53 PM

thanks Tom

Line Gauthier

January 29, 2020 at 12:30 AM

Good one, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire

January 29, 2020 at 1:54 PM

Thank you Miss Line

My Cerebellum

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