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My Cerebellum

the cerebral mist mysteriously complex where the spirit lives Senryu on Mind Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas 1/28/20

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/5/2020 4:20:00 AM

- Congratulations on a well done 3rd place in the contest, Timothy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/5/2020 4:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Sunshine!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2020 3:26:00 PM

I like this. I wonder if that is really where the spirit lives or if it is just an aura inside our body. a mystery of the universe.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/4/2020 3:45:00 PM

Good question Andrea. I think it starts in the mind and projects outward like a bubble

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/4/2020 12:36:00 AM

Mind is a mystery...Congrats on your great win in the contest Timothy..

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/4/2020 11:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Jenish

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/29/2020 5:52:00 AM

Nice senyru Timothy. Good luck. Tom

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/29/2020 1:53:00 PM

thanks Tom

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/29/2020 12:30:00 AM

Good one, Timothy.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/29/2020 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Miss Line