My castle town

Up in a castle, castle far waste, fields full of snow droft, skies black,fog,gray.
Time frozen ice, where no one can stay,day top of day, a life's faded cake.
Cake frosting layed, on top layers stay, a day's magic flake, for sunsets on lakes.
Moon lit night, shade of light, pale like skies, on rooms up high.
Golden gates, inside blue lakes, of snow form flakes, a light shine fades.
Sunset moon, ice cold blue, stars shine too, in loft snow loon.
Empty jewels, in lands of fools, in diamond rooms, and frosty tombs.
Eyes of blue, ocean moon, time too soon, in castle ruins.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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