My Carousel of Thoughts

hop on board my carousel of thoughts
  where wild ideas bob up and down
theories hang on tight for dear life
  some die on the vine; others run rife

tabulate all data collected
  frame it in pie-chart form
make sure it fits my narrative
  truth today, whatever conforms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:41 AM
This poem captured me immediately with the first line, and it kept getting better and better.
Wolf Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 5:14 PM
Hope you hopped aboard a stable horse! ~ Raging Bull
Scott Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 7:42 PM
My thoughts all over the place at the moment love your poem leaves one deep in thought davidscott
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 7:44 PM
David, appreciate your insight into the poem. Here's to reflection and radiance, Gershon
Turner Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 7:09 PM
sorta like throw it out there and see what comes back? I would hop on but mine is going to fast to jump off right now. Fun read, Gershon.
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Yeah, you never want to get rebuffed by your own carousel. Hate when that happens! lol. Thanks for the encouragement, Daniel! ~ Common Sense and Sanity, Gershon
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