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My Carousel of Thoughts

hop on board my carousel of thoughts
  where wild ideas bob up and down
theories hang on tight for dear life
  some die on the vine; others run rife

tabulate all data collected
  frame it in pie-chart form
make sure it fits my narrative
  truth today, whatever conforms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/4/2021 7:41:00 AM
This poem captured me immediately with the first line, and it kept getting better and better.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/4/2021 5:14:00 PM
Hope you hopped aboard a stable horse! ~ Raging Bull
Date: 5/3/2021 7:42:00 PM
My thoughts all over the place at the moment love your poem leaves one deep in thought davidscott
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/3/2021 7:44:00 PM
David, appreciate your insight into the poem. Here's to reflection and radiance, Gershon
Date: 5/3/2021 7:09:00 PM
sorta like throw it out there and see what comes back? I would hop on but mine is going to fast to jump off right now. Fun read, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/3/2021 7:16:00 PM
Yeah, you never want to get rebuffed by your own carousel. Hate when that happens! lol. Thanks for the encouragement, Daniel! ~ Common Sense and Sanity, Gershon

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