My Car Is Competitive

A most competitive tool is my car.
She really hates to be passed on the road.
Whether we are traveling near or far,
Passing turns her into an evil toad.

My right foot presses pedal to the floor.
Doing a hundred, or maybe a bit more.
She throws logic out the window pretty fast.
I cringe my teeth when a semi dares to pass.
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Na Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Hi Caren. This sounds like me. I`m a lead foot myself. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing
Krutsinger Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:57 AM
Thanks for stopping by Gregory. Want to race?
Wolf Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 2:55 PM
I'll look for your car at the Daytona 500! ~ Gershon
Krutsinger Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 3:26 PM
I flew off the road once and a guy who came to my rescue said when my car flipped completely right side up from an upside down position that he used to work at the Indianapolis 500 and he had never seen any car do that. He asked what I did. I yelled "God, please help me!"
Warrior Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 9:42 AM
Old lead foot I see...or is she just pulling your leg...loved this automotive drive-by lol...love you sweetie...^WW^ :o)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 10:00 AM
I have to admit when 60's and 70's music comes on we drive even faster!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 8:42 AM
I hope she’s a fast one so you leave the semi in the dust. ;0)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 10:00 AM
We do. I would be killed if I ever drove anything without a V-8.
Andresen Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:41 AM
- A little Speedy lady ... Porsche 911 GT3 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 10:01 AM
I have an extended excursion actually.
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