Jessica Arteaga Poet Acrostic

My Candy Is...

Syringes make and take a fill
Whispering flows of liquid sill
Ecstatic heart beat announces no will
Elated pressures are grasping the thrill
Thousand of miles and every things still








Acrostic/Monorhyme

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Raul Moreno July 14, 2009 at 1:58 PM Jessica, congrats on your feature...Raul

Nicole Sharon Brown July 13, 2009 at 4:43 PM congratulations on being featured this week.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2009 at 3:35 PM Very Unique Jessica. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff July 13, 2009 at 8:42 AM Congratulations on your featured poem. Ernilando

Adeleke Adeite July 12, 2009 at 10:43 PM Wow, Great flow of words..rhymes, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke

Ashley Yates July 4, 2009 at 11:01 PM Very interesting, I can picture and feel your words so well... Beautiful!