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My Candy Is...

Syringes make and take a fill Whispering flows of liquid sill Ecstatic heart beat announces no will Elated pressures are grasping the thrill Thousand of miles and every things still Acrostic/Monorhyme

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Raul Moreno

Date: 7/14/2009 1:58:00 PM

Jessica, congrats on your feature...Raul

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/13/2009 4:43:00 PM

congratulations on being featured this week.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2009 3:35:00 PM

Very Unique Jessica. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/13/2009 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem. Ernilando

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 7/12/2009 10:43:00 PM

Wow, Great flow of words..rhymes, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke

Ashley Yates

Date: 7/4/2009 11:01:00 PM

Very interesting, I can picture and feel your words so well... Beautiful!