Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Rhyme

My Candle Light

MY CANDLE LIGHT

Blue moon makes night lonely
Sky spreads its hues solely
Gleaming stars shine tamely
On sky hollow.

Trees hide dreams in darkness
In forest I’m sleepless
Try to find my recess
In my shadow.

In dense storm you scamper
From the dark you whisper
Search the light reaper
In life fallow.

At night I cross forest verdant
See your pole star ascent
As mist descends silent
On green meadow.

Sun the nascent day breaker
Blazes sky the dream maker
Lights candles that flicker
Makes me glow.

Draped in grace you’d return
To my candle light pattern
My image you’d discern
As I wallow.

Written : September 7, 2019
May 26, 2020
Contest : Brian's Choice V
Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Gregory Richard Barden April 16, 2018 at 12:18 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win, Subimal! :-) Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:10 AM Thank you, Greg.

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2018 at 7:09 PM WEll done on a win, Subimal. Congratulations. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:09 AM Thank you, Andrea.

Sandra Haight April 15, 2018 at 5:12 PM Lovely imagery, Subimal! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:09 AM Thank you, Sandra.

Joseph May April 15, 2018 at 2:41 PM Congrats on your win Subimal Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:09 AM Thank you, Joseph.

Jan Allison April 15, 2018 at 1:44 PM Many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:09 AM Thank you, Jan.

Line Gauthier April 15, 2018 at 12:53 PM Congrats on your podium finish, Subimal. Well done. Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:08 AM Thank you, Line.

Susan Gentry April 15, 2018 at 12:36 PM Congratulations on your win! Awesome! Subimal Sinha-Roy April 18, 2018 at 3:08 AM Congratulations, Susan.

Mick Talbot April 15, 2018 at 8:04 AM Hi Subimal, Many thanks for taking up the challenge with this relatively new form. Critique: The feminine line endings were fine, however, for me, the rhyming let it down. Congratulations on your 3rd place, many thanks for your support.. Mick Subimal Sinha-Roy April 15, 2018 at 8:32 AM Thank you, Mick for placing the poem. Yes, rhyming was a challenge.

Kim Rodrigues March 22, 2018 at 5:29 AM I love your opening verse! Very nice, Subimal! Subimal Sinha-Roy April 15, 2018 at 8:31 AM Thank you, Kim for visiting and for your nice comments.