My Candle Light

MY CANDLE LIGHT
Blue moon makes night lonely Sky spreads its hues solely Gleaming stars shine tamely On sky hollow. Trees hide dreams in darkness In forest I’m sleepless Try to find my recess In my shadow. In dense storm you scamper From the dark you whisper Search the light reaper In life fallow. At night I cross forest verdant See your pole star ascent As mist descends silent On green meadow. Sun the nascent day breaker Blazes sky the dream maker Lights candles that flicker Makes me glow. Draped in grace you’d return To my candle light pattern My image you’d discern As I wallow.
Written : September 7, 2019 May 26, 2020 Contest : Brian's Choice V Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 4/16/2018 12:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Subimal! :-)
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:10:00 AM
Thank you, Greg.
Date: 4/15/2018 7:09:00 PM
WEll done on a win, Subimal. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:09:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 4/15/2018 5:12:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Subimal! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:09:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra.
Date: 4/15/2018 2:41:00 PM
Congrats on your win Subimal
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:09:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph.
Date: 4/15/2018 1:44:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:09:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 4/15/2018 12:53:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Subimal. Well done.
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Date: 4/18/2018 3:08:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 4/15/2018 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Awesome!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/18/2018 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Susan.
Date: 4/15/2018 8:04:00 AM
Hi Subimal, Many thanks for taking up the challenge with this relatively new form. Critique: The feminine line endings were fine, however, for me, the rhyming let it down. Congratulations on your 3rd place, many thanks for your support.. Mick
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 4/15/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thank you, Mick for placing the poem. Yes, rhyming was a challenge.
Date: 3/22/2018 5:29:00 AM
I love your opening verse! Very nice, Subimal!
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Date: 4/15/2018 8:31:00 AM
Thank you, Kim for visiting and for your nice comments.
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