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My Broken Spirit

I fall ever so fast I loose my sight, and my fight And my spirit too?

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Courtney Dyer

Date: 12/1/2009 10:43:00 PM

Good write!

James Knox

Date: 8/10/2009 4:45:00 PM

this one hits home with me , great write , thanks for your comments :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/6/2009 4:02:00 PM

NO Eddie you ll survive i know--well penned senryu yet sad--chARMA

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/1/2009 8:35:00 PM

This is incredibly sad Eduardo, but, your spirit can be repaired my friend! Clever senryu!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/27/2009 7:20:00 PM

Then find your spirit. Great write Eduardo.~Always Lynette

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/26/2009 10:03:00 AM

you will rise again,i know you will--well penned Eddie and sad to feel your soul broken,if the soul is broken the heart must be too,but you are a survivor little brother--charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2009 5:55:00 PM

Good writing. Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/25/2009 1:30:00 PM

your poetry lifts you from the depths! nice!! jimbo