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My Broken Spirit

I fall ever so fast
I loose my sight, and my fight
And my spirit too?

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Courtney Dyer

December 1, 2009 at 10:43 PM

Good write!

James Knox

August 10, 2009 at 4:45 PM

this one hits home with me , great write , thanks for your comments :)

Charmaine Chircop

August 6, 2009 at 4:02 PM

NO Eddie you ll survive i know--well penned senryu yet sad--chARMA

Charlene Bird

August 1, 2009 at 8:35 PM

This is incredibly sad Eduardo, but, your spirit can be repaired my friend! Clever senryu!

Lynette Chachere

July 27, 2009 at 7:20 PM

Then find your spirit. Great write Eduardo.~Always Lynette

Charmaine Chircop

July 26, 2009 at 10:03 AM

you will rise again,i know you will--well penned Eddie and sad to feel your soul broken,if the soul is broken the heart must be too,but you are a survivor little brother--charma