My Brightest Sun

She shines during day and night,
so bright she might...light 
the darkness away,
 by day her spark is felt by her descendants and heirs.

She has no marks nor a flag .
She is deep in the universe.
on late dark hours is where we converse,
our subjective views and news of slag.
our relevance and mishaps.

She shoots, I wish; for her heart desire,
her dreams to retire,
free from debt.

Her spark is forever present yet invisible.
She appears where and when impossible. 
She is a galaxy on her own. 
She is my Sirius; my brightest star.
my father. my MOTHER
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 7, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Gorgeous write Romeo! 7 :) xomo!
Moses Avatar
June 1, 2017 at 8:59 AM
thank you
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April 7, 2017 at 8:24 AM
I wrote this to appreciate all the values of all mothers out there and depreciate all negative vibes against women in general. To me a woman is a star; she is not yet explored. she is untouched
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