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My Book

before you are the pages blank and to be filled by you and the world the present. is where you are now as in typing this page the past is a book that is closed on it's way to The End

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/10/2009 9:31:00 PM

The past is closed on it's way to the end. Endings are the new beginnings to begin again. God Bless Phyl

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/18/2009 3:31:00 PM

John iii, I love old books... not particularly to read, but to look at and to hold. Old, with pages loose and gold on the edges of their pages. This is an interesting write, which brought about the thoughts thus shared. Lovingly, Dane

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 8/18/2009 2:00:00 PM

I like how the 'you' from above can be both the subject and the reader. The reader (or anyone who isn't the writer...)can write in this book too as long as they get your permission to impact your life to the point where the experience of knowing them finds its way into the blank pages that haven't affected you yet. Thanks for sharing jhl. (None of you understand, I'm not locked in here with all of you...you're all locked in here with me:)

Mary Duhart

Date: 8/18/2009 4:40:00 AM

Excellent write..thanks for commenting on my work also.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/17/2009 2:11:00 PM

this is a gem John especially the last verse--your words are wisdom all through--outstanding--charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2009 1:19:00 PM

Nicely written. Keep writing. Sra