My Blue Cheese Is

The blue cheese is too smelly which I do not like 
The white cheese with the orange stripes and dots
From my mom’s kitchen gets into the psyche
With the Darjeeling tea and toast it cozily prods

Towards the hectic activities of the golden day
With the prawn curry and rice, a lunch with purple glee
The evenings come with the brown shadows on the tray
That you hold while your look floats on the cups of coffee

The sweet and sour soup with a dash of green chilli
Blended with the aroma of your flute like fingers
The kebabs of grilled crab with  pomegranate jelly
In the dreams most nights the aroma of dinner lingers

January 18, 2018
For My Blue Cheese is - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kevin Shaw

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Date: 2/3/2018 10:27:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Probir. Your enchanting style of poetry always delights the soul. Love and many blessings of peace.
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Date: 1/20/2018 12:29:00 AM
Wow! That painted a great picture in my head! I can just smell all that tasty food!!!
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Date: 1/20/2018 12:31:00 AM
Thank you, Jeremiah ...
Date: 1/18/2018 7:31:00 PM
I liked your imagery , Probir. Which food specifically do you hate? Just the blue cheese? The rest of that food sounds pretty yummy. I have tasted some of your country's cuisine and I love it!! I especially liked the image: The evening comes with the brown shadows. . .
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Date: 1/20/2018 12:05:00 AM
Thanks for enjoying the poem, Andrea ...
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Date: 1/20/2018 12:01:00 AM
Thank you for enjoying the poem, Andrea ...
Date: 1/18/2018 11:08:00 AM
Very well done, Probir, great imagery and the scent are very noticeable ; I don't think I'll write for this contest. Thank you for reading my poem and leaving such a inspiring compliment" My heart stopped beating with yours " Hugs Eve ~`*
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/19/2018 9:35:00 AM
:) Hugs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/18/2018 11:17:00 AM
Ha ha ha ... only Eve can say like this ... Thank you so much, dear friend ...
Date: 1/18/2018 9:49:00 AM
Great poem Probir, like you I’m not a lover of blue cheese, I am a selective eater really, well written enjoyed. :))
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Date: 1/18/2018 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and writing the nice comment ...
Date: 1/18/2018 7:17:00 AM
You have ignited my imagination and have sharpened my appetite with this yummy poem of yours my friend , Probir! Delicious!
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Date: 1/18/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thank you that my little poem has pleased the grand poet in you, dear friend ...
Date: 1/18/2018 6:50:00 AM
sounds like a feast Probir i love blue cheese tea and curry but not prawns! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/18/2018 6:56:00 AM
And the floating look , adding to the joy of the brook? ... Thank you, Jan
Date: 1/18/2018 6:07:00 AM
Sounds so delicious my friend--I know the taste of rice and prawn curry ..among the best in the world...and if it is lovingly made as is the case for you, its beyond compare..best for a win, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/18/2018 6:57:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, Vijay ...
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