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My Birthday Wish

I turn thirty-two years old today and I have a wish to silently say for a future that I hope to make as I blow out the candles on the cake. Some may want cars or diamond rings but I don't need material things. So, what exactly does this girl want? How about something she can't flaunt like true friends that will be there and who can openly show they care, friends with a common passion to write is what I am wishing for tonight. There must have been a falling star because, just like magic, here you are!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/21/2015 8:05:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one again. You have some great comments since last I visited.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/23/2015 1:51:00 AM

I am glad you did, Rick... It is nice to know that I have good friends here :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/25/2015 10:33:00 AM

This is such a clever right Kelly. How you celebrate others on your day. HAPPY, HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!!! I would be remise if I did not fav this birthday treasure. Lots Of Love, Armand.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/3/2015 1:26:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this special day with me, Armand. It really means a lot to me! Lots of love to you, my friend!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/24/2015 10:56:00 PM

Your welcome, any left over cake? :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/1/2015 7:41:00 PM

Yes, I will send a slice your way :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2015 8:15:00 AM

Ahh!! Wonderful surprise ending..I enjoyed reading this one today..Happy Birthday either late for this year or early for next..Thirty-two is a good year enjoy every minute..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/30/2015 10:02:00 PM

You're welcome, Sara. I appreciate your participation in my contest... Thank you also for sharing this special day with me. My 32nd year is off to a great start :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2015 11:37:00 PM

this is a fantastic birthday wishing poem and I love how it is all about friendship. BIG HAPPY Belated BIRTHDAY to you, sweetie. sorry I missed it.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/29/2015 12:00:00 AM

Friendship is one of the best gifts that I could get! Thank you so much for sharing this special day with me, Andrea :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/16/2015 9:23:00 PM

First let me wish you a happy belated birthday! I loved this sweet poem, how could I not from such a sweet person!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/24/2015 10:17:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this special day with me, Arthur. Your sweet words mean so much to me :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 3/11/2015 3:14:00 PM

Awwww. That is so sweet.May all you B-day wishes come true. :o)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/20/2015 10:38:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this special day with me, Dan. I had a great birthday and it was just what I needed after a few stressful weeks :)

BE Bailey

Date: 3/9/2015 8:22:00 AM

Happy belated birthday Kelly. Hope you had a wonderful day. May there be many more and may God bless you always. Love love love your poem. True and touching. Keep writing dear and again an exceptional piece of work. God bless. Biggest hugs "B"

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/18/2015 12:41:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this special day with me, "B". Your kind words truly mean so much! Hugs :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/8/2015 7:14:00 PM

Dear Kelly, Happy birthday girl, what a beautiful poem and a perfect wish, from me to you I'm glad we meet here on the soup, your a wonderful writer and such a good friend, cheri

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/16/2015 9:48:00 PM

I am really glad we met here too, my dear friend! Thank you for sharing this special day with me!

Fadi Mathew

Date: 3/8/2015 4:59:00 PM

What a beautiful birthday song! Hope you had a wonderful day. Although it's kinda late, I wish you all the best :) Fadi

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/16/2015 9:09:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this special day with me, Fadi. I had a great birthday this year :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/8/2015 12:46:00 PM

Beautiful gem Kelly! Happy Belated Birthday ;) hope your day was a great one xxx

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/15/2015 2:37:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this special day with me, Wilma. I had a great birthday this year! :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/8/2015 4:25:00 AM

Happy birthday to you. God bless. Enjoy.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/12/2015 10:39:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this special day with me, Ravi!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2015 9:14:00 AM

This is great, happy birthday Kelly.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/8/2015 1:06:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this special day with me, Rick!

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/5/2015 3:41:00 PM

Your words grace the page with a flow of poetic wisdom and understanding as they float within our conscious minds and land gently within our hearts. Emile. #7

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/8/2015 12:55:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Emile. I very much appreciate it!

Daver Austin

Date: 3/5/2015 8:51:00 AM

Good and true friends are more rare than gold or diamonds. I hope your magic friend is for real. Love, daver

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/6/2015 9:13:00 PM

Yes they are, Daver. I was lucky to find them all here on Poetry Soup... Thank you very much for the kind wishes!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2015 10:53:00 PM

Happy birthday to one of the sweetest and most talented poets at Poetry Soup! I love reading your poetry and I wish you much happiness on your birthday. I enjoyed this poem and I consider you a lovely friend. Blessings, Connie

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/6/2015 8:50:00 PM

Thank you for your kind wishes and for sharing this special day with me, Connie. It really means so much!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2015 3:12:00 PM

what a beautiful birthday song, Kelly... your wish is granted; it's full moon tonight in my side of the world..may all the best things you hope for happen!... greetings with huggs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/4/2015 9:34:00 PM

Thank you for the kind greetings and for sharing this special day with me, Nette... Here it will be full moon tomorrow night on the 5th, which makes this birthday even more magical! Hugs :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/4/2015 2:56:00 AM

Yes! Your wish is granted, Kelly. You have my friendship, whenever you want and need it. Happy Birthday! 7 Hugs! Kim :D

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/6/2015 8:37:00 PM

Thank you so much for sharing this special day with me, Kim. I will always be here if you need a friend! Hugs :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2015 2:02:00 AM

Happy Birthday Kelly - hope you get everything you dream of:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/5/2015 8:36:00 PM

Thank you for the kind wishes and for sharing this special day with me, Jan. Hugs :)

James Ranahan

Date: 3/4/2015 12:52:00 AM

my wish for you is that you always can see a falling star where-ever you are and that magic never ever ends.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/5/2015 8:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for the kind wishes, James. I am a kid at heart and I still believe that "when you wish upon a star, your dreams come true".

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/4/2015 12:29:00 AM

Great poem. I wish for these things too. -JT

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/5/2015 7:41:00 PM

Thank you. I hope your wishes come true. Life is so much easier when we've got friends.