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My Birthday Poem For You

Your birthday is indeed  a great time of gaiety,
It calls for a  celebration, a Grand Poetic Party
But, what I have just said is only  a secondary
Most importantly, your life is great and healthy.

I am writing this poem first and foremost,
To send my love and best wishes  to the most
 For all the  dreams of yours, let’s make a toast
May they  all be fulfilled without any cost.
 
Since, I don’t have here your complete address,
I cannot send you chocolates, cakes or roses
So, I’ll just send my fervent  prayer for success
To God, He may protect you, guide you and bless.

I will also enclose  in these  lines of my poem,
My songs of bliss for you and your family at home,
 May  you be free from all worries and gloom
Age added  but, you’re a gal who incessantly bloom.

Our dear Debbie Guzzi , have a very  happy birthday,
If you are only here, I’ll dance with you today,
Like a  lady on her debut on the 18th Natal Day
You’re our Grand Celebrity in ‘tis Land of Poetry.


Belated Happy,  Happy Birthday!!!!!!







Written: Sept. 25,2012


First Place
Contest: It's My Birthday
Contest Judged: 9/30/2012
Poet Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi (the b-day celebrant)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gasun Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 1:09 AM
Thank you so much for your warm congratulatory comments! More power and blessings to all of your!! love/hugs:) LG
Ramage Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 8:45 PM
a lovely tribute to Debbie for her birthday. Well done. Lee
A   Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 2:08 PM
HI LEONORA, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on your win Leonora. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 2:25 AM
Big Congratulations Leonora xx
Liwayway Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 10:17 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS MY DEAR FRIEND NORE FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^) MWUAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Guzzi Avatar
September 30, 2012 at 12:50 PM
Talented writer wonderful work! Thank you from the bottom of me heart. Light & Love
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Nice tribute to a terrific lady.
Wellington Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 9:39 PM
Leonora, a sweet one here for the Lady of poetry...very nice indeed. Thanks for visits and comments. One love. Joy Wells
A   Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:03 PM
oh! You are so sweet Leonora,,,, did i ruin my own surprise... My heart knows you are a blessing, and sweet in thoughts.. I'm looking forward to your B-day as well...i already have a special blog for you.. xox~pd
Scott Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 11:12 AM
NICE WRITE MATE AND TRIBUTE YOUR POEM SPEACKS FOR ITS SELF XX DAVIDSCOTT
Horsman Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 9:57 AM
Leonora this is beautiful, a classical poem, which the Queen of poetry will love i'm sure...
Carrillo Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 6:54 AM
Leonora; this very beautiful, I am sure that Debbie will enjoy it. She is one great lady. Thanks for reading ( The moon Cried )Many blessings. Lucilla
Liwayway Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 9:21 PM
beautiful poem my dear..I'm sure she will love this... have a nice day!!
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 9:08 PM
this is an awesome birthday message that you gave her. One of the best in the contest I've seen! And gosh, do you even know her very well. I'm impressed.
A   Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 8:24 PM
Leonora, wow...what an exciting way to express a Birthday, for Debbie,,, he he he..sounds like something I would do,,, to entertain my self. I love this land of poetry, and how we can celebrate here with our friends... wishing you the best in this fun contest... love ~ :-) pd
Poet Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 6:41 PM
Beautiful birthday card for Debbie here Leonora!Enjoyed the read.Best wishes to you.
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