My Birth Place

Cape Comorin  (Kanyakumari) of Tamil Nadu,
Might be copious of the core concept called Xanadu;
Indian Ocean, Bay of Bengal, Arabian Sea, 
Amalgamate and mingle here, like mermaids, full of glee...!

Treasures of silver, gold, and gemstones within oceans lay,
Sea gods and goddesses; ghosts and angels; live here, they say;
The sun, like a pendulum pushed from the sea, rises up,
Descends and disappears, like a kicked ball, before we sup...!

The southernmost part of the Indian nation is this,
Men and women of many religions live here in bliss; 
Temples, mosques, churches, gurudwaras, and palaces antique,
Exhibit their inter-religiosity, unique...!

We don't have the Angel Fall, but a few falls we have here,
Young and old, at leisure times, play within them full of cheer;
Nature has made her paintings, lo, with green woods and forests,
Lullabies of little birds and beasts, never find a rest...!

Coconuts, Arrack nuts, spices, and tapiocas grow,
Bananas of varieties put up their fresh fruit show;
Goods trading we do; fish in terms of fresh tapioca,
We share, our simple love, in cups of coffee or cocoa...!

Jewelry, stone carvings, cane work, lace work, metal casting,
 Needlework, sculptures, and sea shell crafts go everlasting;
Coral grass mats, palm leaf designs, cane, and bamboo caudex,
Jute-based handicrafts and we have so fine fiber products...!

A dialect of Tamil-mix Malayalam we chant,
Though our mother tongue is classical Tamil known so grand;
Kalial, Bow Song, Karagam Dance, and Kathakali, 
We carry on our cultural heritage zealously...!

Rice, tapioca, coconut, seafood, legumes, lentils,
Mangos, bananas, and jacks are our food fundamentals;
Fishing flourishes; and farming into the inner land,
Toddy-tapping and rubber rearing too go hand in hand...!

Though our innate quality is love mixed with purity, 
Modernity, no doubt, has brought in insecurity...!
Trust in the divine and love for nature, yet, make us grow,
Inspiring us beyond the oceans, and the skies to go...!!!

22 May 2023 
If Your Birthplace-country was a poem Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
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Date: 7/10/2023 8:19:00 AM
Hi Christuraj:Your country sounds like an amazing place of complex sights, sounds and senses. You have described it in a beautifully written poem.I love this line-“ Nature has made her paintings, lo, with green woods and forests’”Best, SuZ
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2023 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/8/2023 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your high placement:-)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/10/2023 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/8/2023 10:28:00 AM
Nice poem. I was born in Jharkhand(then Bihar). I had a chance to go to Kanyakumari in 2019, but our tour got canceled because of strike. It is lovely there. Enjoy the paradise. Nice share,
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Date: 7/10/2023 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 5/22/2023 7:24:00 AM
Beautiful comprehensive poetry in motion. Makes me feel as though I am living in it. All the best in the contest Christuraj:-)
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Date: 5/22/2023 8:45:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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