My Bike

My Bike my ride, took me high I have the scars to prove it my bicycle 4-29-12

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Date: 1/30/2014 4:26:00 AM

ouch.... lol....

Date: 12/11/2013 2:23:00 AM

soup mail

Date: 12/11/2013 2:17:00 AM

stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-) ..... :-)

Date: 12/11/2013 2:12:00 AM

this should had won

Date: 10/19/2012 3:18:00 AM

Love this! Scars and memories - good times!

Date: 5/9/2012 3:01:00 PM

like jack below, love this. harry

Date: 4/30/2012 1:40:00 PM

lol, enjoyed this witty write

Date: 4/30/2012 1:27:00 PM

Where are you writing from? Mu guess - California. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Date: 4/30/2012 4:41:00 AM

:) :) - wery good haiku Sandy! - oxox Anne-Lise

Date: 4/29/2012 3:16:00 PM

ha... awesome... good luck in the contest...pd

Date: 4/29/2012 3:00:00 PM

Smile ˜ Listening unto Eric Clapton's song, 'Wonderful Tonight' * Don't go to high girl ˜ My love, Forever, John!:) ˜

Date: 4/29/2012 2:45:00 PM

A nice haiku. Bike riding is painful for me now, but I remember the thrill of wind in my hair coasting down hill. And a few scars of my own.