My Beautiful Mare

Her beauty was beyond compare,
As her mane blew in the wind.
Her black coat, what a beautiful mare,
A more beautiful mare, you could never find.

She came to me when she was just a foul,
When she was just a sprout.
Her mother had died in a cave where men mined coal,
She was trapped with around a dozen men and could not get out.

I couldn't just leave her,
I had to take her.
I fed her milk and brushed her fur,
I took good care of her.

If only i had seen it coming,
If only the truck could've stopped on a dime.
I  sat beside her dying body humming,
Tears slowly appeared as i thought of an earlier time.

Her beauty was beyond compare,
As her mane blew in the wind.
Her black coat, what a beautiful mare,
A more beautiful mare, you could never find.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 1:42 PM
Emily, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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July 3, 2011 at 12:18 PM
thanks
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:28 PM
Such a sad poem made beautiful by its haunting refrain. Like a sad song. Very nice .And congrats on your win.
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July 3, 2011 at 12:18 PM
thank you
Taylor Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Congrats on your win Emily. Great story. Nice going. xxxRalph
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July 3, 2011 at 12:18 PM
thank you
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 1:45 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Emily
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July 3, 2011 at 12:18 PM
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Sweetheart Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:56 PM
Congrats Emily on your excellent win in the hose contest with this exciting entry luv.. enjoy.. a great adventure of fond memories..
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July 3, 2011 at 12:19 PM
thank you
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Emily. Love, Carol
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July 3, 2011 at 12:19 PM
thanks and you're welcome
Sweetheart Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 12:58 PM
so enjoyed reading your creative poetry on this creature of the mare.. nice flowing lines to tell the tale..luv.,
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July 3, 2011 at 12:19 PM
thanks
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