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my beating heart

hummingbird wings beating swiftly -- my heart when near you
1/10/22 Entered in Damned I Be's Haiku contest

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Date: 4/14/2022 10:27:00 PM
delicious ~
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Date: 1/24/2022 11:23:00 AM
A "Beautiful" write and bird. So small yet so powerful. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 1/15/2022 3:38:00 PM
What lovely expression here. Beautiful. A fve for me. God Bless, JB
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/17/2022 8:43:00 AM
Thank you, Judy! So glad you liked it!
Date: 1/15/2022 1:39:00 PM
This is simply beautiful! A wonderful haiku, Kim. It is a fave for me!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/17/2022 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra! So glad you liked it!
Date: 1/13/2022 8:52:00 AM
Gorgeous
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:45:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 1/12/2022 12:57:00 AM
Captivating, dearest Kim. Blessings.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios!
Date: 1/11/2022 6:10:00 PM
Wow! This is an awesome haiku Kim. I wonder what it would feel like to hold a hummingbird in your hand? A relative of mine feeds them out of her hand. She has a photo to prove it. It took the little hummingbird a long time to trust her enough to come so close. I loved this Kim. Blessings xxoo
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! My aunt used to have one that would land on her hand briefly. I bet holding one would tickle!
Date: 1/11/2022 11:25:00 AM
This is a gem. I love this haiku. love phyl
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, Phyl! So glad you like it!
Date: 1/11/2022 6:15:00 AM
A truly wonderful haiku. Since childhood the hummingbird as been my favorite bird to watch. As not only its magnificent beauty amazes but also its fantastic flying abilities! Your poem sings to this old poet's heart. A fav... God bless...
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert! I've always liked hummingbirds, though I don't see much of them anymore.
Date: 1/10/2022 10:12:00 PM
Hey Kim….sweet and lovely poem! Debx
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 1/10/2022 9:18:00 PM
great imagery, Kim. Love it. Blessing dear for the new year
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! Glad you like it!
Date: 1/10/2022 8:46:00 PM
I could imagine this lovely Haiku. Thank you, Kim. Best wishes to you and your family. Shirley
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:40:00 PM
Thank you, Shirley!
Date: 1/10/2022 3:30:00 PM
lovely and very touching, kim!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 1/14/2022 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene!