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My Balance 2

she arrives parting these prison waves the terrible jolting crash of release shocking noise this lucid vision of you all too kind to fault all too warm to freeze all too flawed to hope all too real no more 'I' your light remains me indecipherable love; this white blue lightning sears the flesh but purifies me you purify me. r'thom'10

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Date: 11/16/2010 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on going into the second round..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2010 12:39:00 PM
thanks very much!
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Date: 11/12/2010 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Ryan. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2010 3:19:00 PM
Congrats Ryan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 3:15:00 PM
Congrats Ryan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Ryan. Love, Carol
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