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My Balance 2

she arrives 
parting these prison waves 
the terrible jolting crash 
of release 
shocking noise 
this lucid vision 
of you 

all too kind 
to fault 
all too warm 
to freeze 
all too flawed 
to hope 
all too real 

no more 'I' 
your light remains me 
indecipherable 
love; 
this white blue lightning 
sears the flesh 
but purifies me 
you purify me. 

r'thom'10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/16/2010 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on going into the second round..Sara
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Date: 11/15/2010 12:39:00 PM
thanks very much!
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Date: 11/12/2010 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Ryan. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2010 3:19:00 PM
Congrats Ryan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 3:15:00 PM
Congrats Ryan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all..with luv..
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Date: 8/3/2010 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Ryan. Love, Carol
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