My Balance 1

without support
silent echoes and rumours
'did i hear that?'
tracing invisible paths 
through insubstantial material
no kindness
no direction

fatally incorrigible 
from fear 
walking is sitting
running is lying down
the passage of time ceases
i drift
like carbon monoxide

slow burning 
self-destructive
to one
to zero
without matter
without life;

without you.

r.thom'10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Thomas Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 11:53 AM
thank you! i will do!
Guzzi Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 11:49 AM
touching view of how it feels to be lost and not quite sane try my verse Duh? Light & love
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