My Baby

Pain departed a sacred portion of human flash.
A devout detortion and flamboyant living dash.
Flagrant flaunt impregnate impish liege slash.
Slanderous sleave and pitiable pithecanthrope,
Pishogue sagacious mistranslated pish a girl rash.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 10:38 AM
Your most excellent verse is of rhyme form..lusciuos big long words! Light & Love
Owens Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 2:58 PM
Very nice poem....thank you for your nice comments....Marty
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Good rhyming, nice images, alliteration make it fine piece to enjoy
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 4:15 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Daljit. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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