My Apology: To Wind

we found eachother,
lost in pain that we both knew,
we loved eachother,
but the distance only grew,

i was here,
and you were there,
no word of conversation,
i still remember all those things you said,
they gave my heart a reincarnation,

you were my love,
my sweet vampire,
the wind that carried off my rain,
you whispered to me,
and i felt your arms,
as we kissed away our pain,

though we loved eachother,
we wrote together,
of love and pain and blood,
the distance only seemed to grow,
and then to tear us apart,

you found a girl,
it broke my heart,
i cried and accepted the inevitable,
you and i would always be apart,
there was nothing i could do about it,

i fell in love,
i didnt mean to,
but it was one of the best mistakes i could make,
i broke your heart,
and still i miss you,
but perhaps this was our fate,

i never wanted to forget to say,
that i love you and i always will,
i never wanted to forget to say,
im sorry, i wish we could have worked out,

perhaps if things were different,
and this land mass wasnt so large,
perhaps if we had held tighter,
and had a solid heart,

we found eachother,
and fell in love,
lost in a pain that we both shared,
my dearest Wind im sorry for this,
that our love, could only last here...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/15/2010 4:13:00 PM
Wow Princess. All I can say to you is awesome :-) have a lovely weekend
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us Rain. May your days always be filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2010 9:30:00 AM
I love you and forgive you
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Date: 10/6/2010 9:13:00 AM
Hi, Rain, you don't appear much on PS. I hope you are alright. Nice creative write. enjoyed it,
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