My Antidote

Unveil my eyes, O my Love!
So that I see your graceful face
Shelter my load on your shoulders, O my Love!
For I am a blossom infatuated with emotive rain
Sweep my lips open, O my Love!
So that its cries can be quietened with your kiss
Resonate your song deep in my ears, O my Love!
For my soul is weary with pain
Clutch me deep in the warm chambers of your chest
So that my quivering rib-cage holds my heart firm from this wintry plummet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Evans Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 7:20 PM
"I am a blossom infatuated with emotive rain". Such passion. Nice poem.
Balram Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 8:19 PM
Thank you Richard- the mood was such.
One Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 6:33 AM
Great poem Rohini..
Balram Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 6:01 PM
Thank you Kind Sir.
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