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My Antidote

Unveil my eyes, O my Love! So that I see your graceful face Shelter my load on your shoulders, O my Love! For I am a blossom infatuated with emotive rain Sweep my lips open, O my Love! So that its cries can be quietened with your kiss Resonate your song deep in my ears, O my Love! For my soul is weary with pain Clutch me deep in the warm chambers of your chest So that my quivering rib-cage holds my heart firm from this wintry plummet.

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Date: 3/17/2018 7:20:00 PM
"I am a blossom infatuated with emotive rain". Such passion. Nice poem.
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Rohini Balram
Date: 3/18/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you Richard- the mood was such.
Date: 3/17/2018 6:33:00 AM
Great poem Rohini..
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Rohini Balram
Date: 3/17/2018 6:01:00 PM
Thank you Kind Sir.

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