My Answer

And if in you my heart delights,
Not just because of your great writes! 
I hunger for your immortal love, 
Make haste to me my sweet turtle dove. 
You fill my heart as no one can, 
Eternally I'll be your devoted fan. 
Empty, my breast upon you wait, 
This second time my biggest date. 

With everything that's in me. 
Jew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/19/2010 6:02:00 AM
Don't worry love, I know the man. A hell of a romantic. Sort of on the sensitive side (well i guess that is the artist in him), but he can be hell raiser and yet so like a child. Cuddling brings out the best him (for no matter what he says, I call him a momma's boy). Peace my friend, I am really enjoying my reads.
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Date: 11/16/2010 10:16:00 AM
O no!! My dear, I, am the one who is happy i got a second chance. I made the boobooo. He is incredible kind and loving, a heart of gold, I do not deserve him, but God put it in his heart to show me love and forgiveness and that's OK with me, maybe just OK, but great. Joy
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Date: 11/16/2010 9:30:00 AM
wow! wow! wow!,,, I bet he is smiling for the second chance.. Sometimes my sweet Nate, can not believe I picked him.. He smiles so much at the thought,, enjoyed your answer to David,..p.s. ((soup mail)),..p..d
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:31:00 PM
Oh wow, Joy, "With everything that's in me"!!! I can relate girl. Read, "All That I Am"! I enjoy your poems so! Love, Audrey
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