My American Haikus (For Jack)

wet pavement gleaming
on a black monday night, wet
with black monday rain

ole saint nick a no-
show once again in motown
another ghetto christmas

some people are al-
ways right, some people are al-
ways wrong, which are you?

imagine martin was missed and
tupac never got shot and
brother malcolm lived

inner city bustle
gives way to that inner city
hustle- thats motown

we stand on the roof-
tops yelling out unto the
masses; can you hear us?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Crane Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 6:15 AM
I love this. Makes me want to pour that bourbon and put on some vinyl. Well done mister
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2009 at 10:32 PM
Just read your comment, Brian. You can think of me as the Mother Ship. Love, Carolyn
Chircop Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 9:33 AM
strong message my friend--excellent---charma
Higgins Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 4:55 AM
This is a powerful piece of art my friend..you have so much force in these lines..from Malcolm to Tupac..inner city...ghetto christmas..awesome write.
Devonshire Avatar
May 13, 2009 at 2:14 PM
Your style here is reminiscent of Carl Sandburg missed with a touch of ghetto poet. (Sandburg is one of my faves.) Enjoyed reading this portrait of life in the Motown inner city. Nice work, Brian! Love, Carolyn
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May 13, 2009 at 1:12 PM
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