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To my terra of roots
my allegiance I vow
I wallow in your fruits
and to your flag I bow.

Dream not till wake of dawn
beaming sun light I wait
burst of glee of no bourn
the feels of the soul, sate.

Awe chills into my spine
as your Hymn in pride sung
for Home in peace I pine
and love never be swung.

How could my pen, you turn
in a fine rhyming word
as my quill longs to learn
inking with grace and verve.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/19/2019 11:48:00 PM
Dear Besma, you created an exquisite masterpiece!! So wonderful you love your country.. Your heartfelt words are so inspiring, my dear friend.. A fav for me!! Blessings to you!!
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Date: 11/21/2019 2:10:00 PM
Dear Robertina, so much delighted by your sweet and generous words on my humble work.. thank you so much.. Best regards and blessings.
Date: 11/13/2019 5:33:00 PM
Beautiful allegiance you've penned, sweet. Love it.
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Date: 11/15/2019 3:41:00 AM
My great pleasure to read such a rewarding feedback! Thank you so much for your genuine support, M L. Kiser . Regards and blessings.
Date: 11/12/2019 12:48:00 PM
Hello Besma Rlabi Dziri, that is a lovely allegiance vow. Blessing my friend.
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Date: 11/15/2019 3:35:00 AM
Blessings to you too, dear Darlene.. thank you so much for your graceful presence and appreciative words. Regards and blessings.
Date: 11/11/2019 4:02:00 AM
A patriotic Soul my dearest friend. Your first four lines say it all. Sadly we had to leave the land of our roots, but we are grateful to the land that accepted us. Our memories will always be ones we treasure though, and reminisce on at family gatherings. A beautiful poem dearest Soul....Maria Hugs
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Date: 11/15/2019 3:12:00 AM
Sometimes we are to tread other paths chosen for us.. I think what is more important is that we value what life offers to us.. we build our very world with the depth of our thoughts and feelings.. thank you so much dearest Maria for such warm response to my humble work.. always an honour and a great pleasure.. Love and hugs.
Date: 11/4/2019 4:34:00 PM
A poet's delight to read such beautiful poetry my friend! A joy to read after my having been sick these last few days and on the mend now..... A fav... a true gem too....
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:52:00 PM
Happy to know that you are doing well and writing so wonderful a poetry! Thank you so much, Robert for being here to read and appreciate my humble work.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 11/4/2019 1:58:00 PM
Your write has such pride and love for your country - 'to my terra of roots, my allegiance I vow, I wallow in your fruits, and to your flag I bow' - what heartwarming sentiments my dear dear friend. I cried when South Africa won the world cup - Africa is the land I love. All my love and hugs, Jenny.
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:47:00 PM
A sensitive beauty as you are dearest Jenny, how wouldn't you cry when your land of birth embraces victory! So pleased to see you again dear soul sister, and read your warm and uplifting feedback.. warmest wishes and regards.. Love and hugs.
Date: 11/3/2019 6:02:00 PM
It's a good thing to love the land in which one is born, but allegiance is a thing that demands exclusivity, and mine belongs to the One who gave me life, the Creator of all things
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Son Of Spock for your unique feel for words and great feedback.. Best regards and blessings.
Date: 11/3/2019 5:09:00 AM
A patriotic poem, i am happy you love your country so much.. i am not a nationalist though and do not agree with the history of the racist British empire, so struggle to be patriotic.... this is a great poem..
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:34:00 PM
Yes, I do love the land.. its history and its beauty regardless of the political systems or ideological visions that might stain my sentiments.. thank you so much, Silent One for your sincere feedback and great support.. Best regards and blessings.
Date: 10/30/2019 11:12:00 AM
The sincere love towards your country takes pride of place in this emotive poem, Besma. We should all be proud of our native land...looking up to her as a Mother. May it prosper and enjoy peace. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:25:00 PM
So true and sincere are your words, Paul.. Indeed, the Love of one's country is born with us.. and flows in our veins.. I am so grateful for your honorable visit and wonderful comment.. thank you so much.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 10/28/2019 4:40:00 PM
Sometimes things do seem so scant, And if something profound we plant; Poem prepare; With you share; With eloquence will always enchant.
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:19:00 PM
Profound and genuine feelings do weave beauties.. a pleasure and honour to have you read my humble work, James.. thank you so much.. Regards and blessings.
Date: 10/27/2019 10:01:00 PM
Besma, To your's, I would welcome such dear devotion home. -Richard
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Richard for such a graceful comment.. Regards and blessings.
Date: 10/25/2019 9:04:00 AM
We are born from the earth of our country,we belong to our flag, we have an unshakable faith in our nation.and to its Anthem our tears are shed, our blood is bled.. nice work Besma; a devoted countrywoman to her home land, no wonder when the Land, in return rewards her citizens with best awards..
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Date: 10/27/2019 12:21:00 PM
You have genuinely phrased your love.. veneration.. loyalty.. to your Land of birth.. honour and glory, Hamid.. and beyond words is that feel as we listen to our National Anthem! Blessed by the Grace of God being awarded by a president of integrity and loyalty.. thank you so much.. Beauty and genuineness in your presence.. Regards and blessings.
Date: 10/25/2019 3:27:00 AM
Your patriotism is the hallmark of honour and to be admired. Blessings.
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Date: 10/27/2019 11:57:00 AM
How couldn't we vow our devotion to our Mother Land.. Deeply touched and humbled by your kindness, Victor.. thank you so much for your honourable visit and sincere words.. Regards and blessings.
Date: 10/24/2019 11:28:00 AM
You just pledged your allegiance with JOY...Nice write...
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Date: 10/27/2019 11:48:00 AM
It is with joy and pride I pledge my Love and allegiance to my country.. so much pleased and grateful for your kind words, Arturo.. Best regards and blessings.
Date: 10/24/2019 9:45:00 AM
Well written Besma, I agree with Vijay , it flows so well. Quite a patriotic verse. Tom
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Date: 10/27/2019 11:42:00 AM
The love within for our land of birth does write its very verses.. always a great pleasure and honour to read your beautiful comment.. thank you so much, Tom for your generosity and humility.. Regards and blessings.
Date: 10/24/2019 8:31:00 AM
I enjoyed the tone and flow of this rhythmic poem..beautiful sound to your heartfelt verses, Besma. A special poem you wrote..I am saving in my FAVES.
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Date: 10/27/2019 11:38:00 AM
Always honoured to have you read and appreciate my humble work, dear Vijay.. thank you heaps for your continuous and sincere support.. my deepest regards and blessings..