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My Allegiance I Vow

To my terra of roots my allegiance I vow I wallow in your fruits and to your flag I bow. Dream not till wake of dawn beaming sun light I wait burst of glee of no bourn the feels of the soul, sate. Awe chills into my spine as your Hymn in pride sung for Home in peace I pine and love never be swung. How could my pen, you turn in a fine rhyming word as my quill longs to learn inking with grace and verve.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 4/13/2020 9:14:00 PM

"My quill longs to learn..." and so One shall learn the love of letters...beautiful alliteration Besma, "And love never be swung" ...a beautiful allegiance...J.A.B.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/14/2020 4:36:00 PM

Humbly always trying to climb up levels of beauty that satisfy my aspirations and so honoured and pleased that this could meet a reader's thirst for a unique and different read.. thank you so much, Justin, for your valuable appreciation.. Regards and blessings.

Robertina B.

Date: 11/19/2019 11:48:00 PM

Dear Besma, you created an exquisite masterpiece!! So wonderful you love your country.. Your heartfelt words are so inspiring, my dear friend.. A fav for me!! Blessings to you!!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/21/2019 2:10:00 PM

Dear Robertina, so much delighted by your sweet and generous words on my humble work.. thank you so much.. Best regards and blessings.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/13/2019 5:33:00 PM

Beautiful allegiance you've penned, sweet. Love it.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/15/2019 3:41:00 AM

My great pleasure to read such a rewarding feedback! Thank you so much for your genuine support, M L. Kiser . Regards and blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/12/2019 12:48:00 PM

Hello Besma Rlabi Dziri, that is a lovely allegiance vow. Blessing my friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/15/2019 3:35:00 AM

Blessings to you too, dear Darlene.. thank you so much for your graceful presence and appreciative words. Regards and blessings.

Maria Williams

Date: 11/11/2019 4:02:00 AM

A patriotic Soul my dearest friend. Your first four lines say it all. Sadly we had to leave the land of our roots, but we are grateful to the land that accepted us. Our memories will always be ones we treasure though, and reminisce on at family gatherings. A beautiful poem dearest Soul....Maria Hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/15/2019 3:12:00 AM

Sometimes we are to tread other paths chosen for us.. I think what is more important is that we value what life offers to us.. we build our very world with the depth of our thoughts and feelings.. thank you so much dearest Maria for such warm response to my humble work.. always an honour and a great pleasure.. Love and hugs.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/4/2019 4:34:00 PM

A poet's delight to read such beautiful poetry my friend! A joy to read after my having been sick these last few days and on the mend now..... A fav... a true gem too....

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2019 3:52:00 PM

Happy to know that you are doing well and writing so wonderful a poetry! Thank you so much, Robert for being here to read and appreciate my humble work.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/4/2019 1:58:00 PM

Your write has such pride and love for your country - 'to my terra of roots, my allegiance I vow, I wallow in your fruits, and to your flag I bow' - what heartwarming sentiments my dear dear friend. I cried when South Africa won the world cup - Africa is the land I love. All my love and hugs, Jenny.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2019 3:47:00 PM

A sensitive beauty as you are dearest Jenny, how wouldn't you cry when your land of birth embraces victory! So pleased to see you again dear soul sister, and read your warm and uplifting feedback.. warmest wishes and regards.. Love and hugs.

Silent One

Date: 11/3/2019 5:09:00 AM

A patriotic poem, i am happy you love your country so much.. i am not a nationalist though and do not agree with the history of the racist British empire, so struggle to be patriotic.... this is a great poem..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2019 3:34:00 PM

Yes, I do love the land.. its history and its beauty regardless of the political systems or ideological visions that might stain my sentiments.. thank you so much, Silent One for your sincere feedback and great support.. Best regards and blessings.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2019 11:12:00 AM

The sincere love towards your country takes pride of place in this emotive poem, Besma. We should all be proud of our native land...looking up to her as a Mother. May it prosper and enjoy peace. ~ Warm regards // paul

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2019 3:25:00 PM

So true and sincere are your words, Paul.. Indeed, the Love of one's country is born with us.. and flows in our veins.. I am so grateful for your honorable visit and wonderful comment.. thank you so much.. my deepest regards and blessings.

James Horn

Date: 10/28/2019 4:40:00 PM

Sometimes things do seem so scant, And if something profound we plant; Poem prepare; With you share; With eloquence will always enchant.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2019 3:19:00 PM

Profound and genuine feelings do weave beauties.. a pleasure and honour to have you read my humble work, James.. thank you so much.. Regards and blessings.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/27/2019 10:01:00 PM

Besma, To your's, I would welcome such dear devotion home. -Richard

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/9/2019 3:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, Richard for such a graceful comment.. Regards and blessings.

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/24/2019 11:28:00 AM

You just pledged your allegiance with JOY...Nice write...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/27/2019 11:48:00 AM

It is with joy and pride I pledge my Love and allegiance to my country.. so much pleased and grateful for your kind words, Arturo.. Best regards and blessings.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/24/2019 9:45:00 AM

Well written Besma, I agree with Vijay , it flows so well. Quite a patriotic verse. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/27/2019 11:42:00 AM

The love within for our land of birth does write its very verses.. always a great pleasure and honour to read your beautiful comment.. thank you so much, Tom for your generosity and humility.. Regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/24/2019 8:31:00 AM

I enjoyed the tone and flow of this rhythmic poem..beautiful sound to your heartfelt verses, Besma. A special poem you wrote..I am saving in my FAVES.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/27/2019 11:38:00 AM

Always honoured to have you read and appreciate my humble work, dear Vijay.. thank you heaps for your continuous and sincere support.. my deepest regards and blessings..